| Reviews for Thy Kingdom Come |
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killerhot80 chapter 5 . 7/23 OmegaRealism good job for being a dick. |
TigrezzTail chapter 5 . 7/19 Ah, i do love watching the mighty Uchiha getting shot down. |
Stories for Reading chapter 1 . 7/17 Ignore OmegaRealism he is just a troll with insecurities, do what you wanna do and for me I really enjoyed reading your latest chapter. |
OmegaRealism chapter 5 . 7/17 Like I said over forgiving naive gay ass stupid limp dick bitch virgin like you should get the fuck off my website and kill yourself because you are nothing but trash |
OmegaRealism chapter 4 . 7/17 I hope some kills you magic is mana mean spiriual eenergy meaning its far weaker then chakra which you need both physical energy and spiritual energy and combine them to m make chakra this truly shows how mentally retarded you really are and how u educated you are. You a trash author a naive limp dick gay fat virgin bitch and you bitch ass will die as a fat ugly virgin. Get the fuck off my website and take this trash with you and burn whatever device you wrote this garbage on. |
OmegaRealism chapter 3 . 7/17 Lol you are so fucking pathetic this over used cliche bullshit trash you have only copied and pasted from others get the fuck off this website you stupid fucking naive child |
OmegaRealism chapter 2 . 7/17 Your a piece of low life filth a shitty author a no body a naive fool. People who fuck you over get fucked over or killed that simple child grow the fuck up you annoying bitch |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3 I say go for ancient egypt and I am in favor of including evelyn in the pairing. |
Gjagent2013 chapter 4 . 7/2 I’m glad to hear that you are not going to turn this into a haram story less lemon more story is always great I also I’m looking forward to see the elemental nations witch are feudal Japan countries vs the west witch are European Middle Ages I look forward to the Great War I vote for your next naruto story to be Roman or spartan story please and thank you |
Lordhell chapter 4 . 7/3 This will be another typical banshing story where kakashi and the others just get beat up, they run away with their ego and pride intact believing themselves to be superior and then they come back to cause trouble only to be subsequently defeated and turned torepeat the cycle?I hope not. I really like that you introduced youkoso no elf elves. The only downside I have is that it is not harem, but it does not matter if you know how to show the relationship between Naruto, Delva and Evelyn. I hope the romance and is more common here, and to deceive us, he longed to see the scenes of lemon if there is with Delva and Evelyn . |
Kosword chapter 4 . 7/3 I have sent you a PM, but I do not know if you know that Fanfiction no longer notifies you when they send you one, so you should check your tray if you want to see if they have sent you a message. |
Sasmur chapter 4 . 7/2 I really want to continue seeing more of this although I am concerned about the exaggerated banshing that is used in the story since many good stories have fallen for the same reason. Votes - (Evelyn) Yes. - (Location) Egypt. |
Zakrark chapter 4 . 7/2 My friend Killerhot recommended this fic to me and I must admit that it has captivated me until now. It is a shame that I will not see harem of beautiful and hot elves, but I must even admit that I would kill just to be with Delva or Evelyn. I give a firm yes so that Evelyn discovers happiness next to the Uzumaki. On the suggestions you have given, I am inclined to Egyptians, since Greeks are more common. |
ExoChaos chapter 4 . 7/2 I loved the chapter. I vote yes for Evelyn, and if there is any chance you are going to do a harem you have my thumb up and a nosebleed on my part. I choose the Egyptians. |
OverHeaven chapter 4 . 7/2 Konoha does not understand that she is getting into forces beyond her capacity and that will be her end. What I don't understand is why Naruto doesn't respond to assassination attempts with the execution of the perpetrators. Evelyn is hot and I vote for her to be with Naruto. And I chose Rome. |