Hey, I don't want to be rude. I am a senior writer and just want to offer some help. I haven't read your story TBH, but the story itself is not the point. The thing is, putting things like 'Bad at summaries, give it a chance.' in the summary is doing the opposite of what you want. It is the worst thing you can put in the summary. It will reduce the number of people who will click your story. Just delete it. Feel free to deleted this comment too, ;)

This is so Mycroft! The annoyance at losing the bet, the mental exercise doing deductions and the way the deductions were described and explained in a stream of consciousness was great