Naruto not taking the Kusanagi and him not using clones was really off-putting. For a person who's lived centuries, he'd done a rookie mistake especially him knowing how dangerous the weapon is.
If this was done purely to move the plot forward, then it was a poor choice.

Oh shit, continúe pls 10/10

This is a good fic. I like that you're not doing the whole "I'm Naruto the Mighty and You're all too weak for me to act even half-assed decent too, so I shall act like the cocky faggot douche in a club wearing a Pink Polo Shirt like I'm Miami Vice" kind of cliche.

Yeah, I know, that was a bit descriptive, but it's true, that's how most Naruto DxD crosses are turning out now, especially those written by fairy tail dragon slayer who seems to think Naruto's Rasengan is equal to a Kamehameha.

Curious what Zetsu's role is in this... and hopefully, he dies. Seriously, the one thing that PISSED ME OFF with Naruto was all the villains whom act like they're top shit when they're sitting their swinging on someone else's nuts. Sasuke with Orochimaru, Obito with Madara, Madara with Zetsu, and Zetsu with Kaguya, and lets not forget the newest one's Jigen with Isshiki.

It's like dude... seriously... if you're going to act like a sniveling brown-noser, then STFU with all the smack talk! Like Zetsu "All you shinobi are weak, pawns, I manipulated you, while I hide in mommy's sleeve"... seriously?! Or Jigen "I am possessed by the kama of Isshiki Otsutsuki"... Congratulations ass-hate, you're the cock-puppet of a LITERAL FREAKING PARASITE! The whole Otsutsuki clan are parasites... they're like the Sharingan given mortal form... no earn skills, just stealing and copying shit, and then you have to listen to their bullshit villain dialogue while fairy tail dragon slayer gives their ego's a hand-job.

At least Orochimaru was a legitimate bad-ass, kicked everyone's ass WHILE he's recovering from a recent injury... Hell, he kicked Jiraiya and Tsunade AND Naruto's ass WITH HIS ARMS BEING DEAD WEIGHT and all while manipulating everyone like they were his pet bitches! Screw the Otsutsuki, Orochimaru was a downright bad-ass on par with Aizen!

Holy shit... talk about killing a story in a single chapter. It's almost impressive how bad this chapter is.

Great chapter I enjoyed reading it.

pésima historia que perdida de tiempo

You had me with the first two chapters but im not feeling this third chapter. Particular with zetsu and the kusanagi blade. Dxd already has so many factions and potential villains why even use naruto biggest problem is naruto saying. "Ill deal with the kusanagi blade later". Why would that stop him he can litreally make thousand of clones why wouldn't he send one to confrim the kill and retrieve the blade. Hell naruto would of been fast enough to snatch the blade from freeds hands.

Keep making this great story, u are doing good. XD

naruto has the other tail3e beasts power and his own near intimate chakra he could take down all the dragons with ease all he would have to do is hit them with a truth seeking ball and they would all be dead in seconds

awesome work, loved it!

I'm not entirely happy that you put in the Kusanagi and I dread the future of seeing more objects or worse characters from Naruto appearing. This also only confirm that God is a stealing mother fucker and nothing more than a thieve that steals other Pantheons weapons and make the world believe its his.

I'm sure, you as writer has a stupid reason for Naruto not reclaiming that weapon while that has could be done easily. Its stupid and only for drama reason.

well, why throw more shit at him, if they already finished him with the bastard

You have no idea what you're doing do you? Maybe you had an idea of a Naruto you didn't want to be weak compared to other characters so you made him old and powerful. But you wrote plot holes into damn near ever paragraph. This fight with Freed? Are you telling me Naruto isn't fast enough or couldn't make a clone to go and retrieve the Kusanagi. And if he wasn't going to be there in time to actually help Issei save Asia what was the point of rushing off like he did? What you're writing makes no sense in comparison with the skills Naruto has supposedly gained over centuries of living. Scrap this or rewrite or prepare to be flamed by people who are not as nice as I am.

Yours Truly,
William H. Bonney

great chapter keep it up

good fic. but it’s obvious your using plot armor lmao.

so naruto defeats freed (thinking about the legendary powerful sword) and doesn’t even think of retrieving it? or sending a clone to pick it up before anyone else finds it. he even said there are many rogue fallen around the area.

now it disappeared? well of course lmao u left it there to do what? go check on issei and do nothing. he knew that rias could revive her, there was no need to check on the peerage.

good fic but your plot armor is out of control man. make the story believable and it would be a decent fic.