I kinda wish Naruko will wisit Konaha in the most royal way possible. To show thos assholes "Look im rich, im better than ever and more powerfull than all of you" just to piss of the Villagers and the council

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Better, but Nero’s form of address for Hakuno is Sousha, or Praetor. Not Soshayo. The yo is not part of the title, that’s part of the sentence she’s speaking. And it’d be Kaa-san for Artoria. If you want to use Ka-san it would need an emphasis mark above the letter “a” in “Ka” hence why you see it written with two “a” letters as that mark denotes an extended vowel.

Have Naruko meet Karin Uzumaki.

Nice, please update when you can. I used to be a big Rwby fan til they fire Vic Mignogna who played Qrow, they did him wrong on both Rooster Teeth and Funimation. I don’t know who Naruko bring with her to the bridge, it will overkill if u bring Hercules or Lancelot.

Yay! This chapter was fantastic! The "normal" breakfast was by far my favorite part. Mordred crying over her mother's praise was sweet.

Already expect for Naruko to want Sasuke's head on a pike.

So Naruko is likely to arrive in the Land of Rivers long before Konoha does seeing as she left at the same time they did but she headed directly to the hideout while they had to, head to Suna first then spend a lot of time waiting so Sakura can cure Kankuro of Poison and Pakun can find where the hideout is, then make their way partway there only to have to fight Fake-Itachi and Fake-Kisame.

Love it.
Please write more.

So couple of things, One please get a beta or three. Your grammar is okay, but could use some TLC.

Two, Haha-san isn’t actually a form of address. It’s only used form is Haha-ue, which is the maternal equivalent of Chichi-ue (How Mordred addresses Artoria). Otherwise it’s Okaa-san, Kaa-san, or Kaa-chan when you address your mother. Naruko would use Kaa-chan. She’s irreverent like that.

I want to see Danzo pay for his stunt in this chapter!

Will Konoha face repercussions due to Danzo’s actions!?

plz make updates faster. otherwise we might forget this novel entirely.

Biggest issue I have and the only one really worth talking about is saying that Servants outclass the Kage because that’s Nasuverse fanwank tbh. High tier servants like Herk and Larturia probably outclass most of the Kage, but not every single one and certainly not every servant. The levels of power we see from even just strong ninja in Shippuden canon is comparable to what we see from the vast majority of the servants from Fate.

Otherwise good work.

Gotta admit, Queen of Heroes is an awesome idea. All that she's lacking is her obsession with Saberfaces.

Great chapter. Your grammar has improved and finally some one gets Heracles' name spelled right.