OMG YES GET SOME BAKUGO ASS GIRL

What an amazing read. Perfectly in character. Thank you so much!

Please update! I love this fanfiction and I really love your style of writing!

I’m so happy to have found this story, I love it so much. Haruki is quite reliable and down to earth. I like that you’re not shy about putting in more gritty and believable content, more aligned with the characters. Your writing style is wonderful to read and follow. I love your writing for Haruki, Bakugo
Dabi and Mina the most.
I can’t wait to read more.

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It is a little sad you removed so much of the graphic content. I mean, the story is M rated anyway, so I guess it shouldn’t have been a problem for the readers or you could put a warning either at the beginning of the chapter or at the beginning of the graphic content.

Sweet chapter! Glad they feel more comfortable with each other. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Your story is amazing!
Haruki is a fun character to follow and I love how she has a history with Dabi

After eavesdropping on his battle with Izuku and the conversation with AM that followed, and also going unpunished (just like she’s never quite properly punished for all her breaking of rules and committing crimes) because she apparently was not caught, like she never is — Does her quirk work on the security robots or something? — she then also snuck into Katsuki’s room to sleep with him as stress relief…? Or basically to cheer him up? And he, for some reason, let her. I don’t think a crush would allow such rash actions from him, no matter the stress he might feel. Isn’t he the type to face the stress head-on, not distract himself from it? He’s dealt with way worse way better before. He could’ve tried blasting the League through the seven levels of Hell the moment he was untied, but he made sure to inform them that not only was he going to blast them through those levels, but that he also was still technically allowed to — that is, he was careful about also not breaking rules by doing so. He’s a goody-goody. It was already strange when goody two-shoes Katsuki didn’t snitch on Haruki for vaping, but now he’s even willing to sleep with his classmate while injured after a battle and discussion where he learned of All Might’s perilous situation with Izuku, alongside the fact that the latter is now in constant danger regarding the League, and the fact that Izuku hadn’t been lying to him all his life — but rather, that he (Katsuki) has been wrong all this time, about many many things. Would he not definitely want to think on all this for the night instead? His perfect record at UA has been ruined, for one, in an attempt to battle this “stress” head-on — rule-breaking that he unhesitatingly fessed up to too, the pedant — and therein he also finally learned that his entire old way of thinking requires total upheaval. That he‘ll have to change his system entirely. These aren’t the kinds of problems sex can take away from. These aren’t the kinds of problems that Perfectionist Bakugou would even try to distract himself from, especially by breaking rules, or even encouraging others breaking rules. When his middle school extras were smoking, he didn’t say “hide that shit better” or “do it while I’m not here, tf”, he told them to stop completely. Kids are kids, but even though he’s hit Izuku loads, there’s quite much indication that he’s ever used his quirk to enact violence on him in middle school (; the extras told him that he went “too far”, and HRKS also mentioned that Katsuki overdid it that day with the steaming-hand on jacket, plus suicide suggestion). So, back on track, if Katsuki just got back from a battle that he sacrificed his grandpa-looking 10:30PM sleep schedule for, I really see no reason for his to reaction to be anything less than indignantly if not ‘explosive’ after coming back from the battle essentially shook his entire world, only to find someone having snuck into his room in the dead of night, waiting to seduce him. After following him from afar and listening in on a conversation and confession he’d apparently tore himself up trying to keep to himself after having figured it out about Izuku’s quirk, which he for one reason or another doesn’t mind, Haruki then decided the best step to take would be to have sex with him. And he went along with it…

…?

Maybe this is In-Character for Haruki, but it’s so completely OOC for Katsuki that I’m honestly still reeling.

There’s a lot more I’m pondering on, namely about how Haruki’s broken rules (e.g. dealt drugs and vaped and broke noses and protected a villain from police and now even seduced a classmate in his room after sneaking off to eavesdrop on a quirk battle instead not leaving after curfew or instead calling a teacher once she realized what it was) but they all seems to be for bad girl clout in the story or to show off the quality or lack thereof of her relationship with her friends, and not because she’s actually trying to develop on her own as a person by learning from the consequences of her actions. To become who stops doing such things, generally a person would be held accountable for them in their social relationships and not just by their teachers, but hers seem to have been lenient with her anyway when they DO catch her, which isn’t often anyhow for the Pros they boast to be… It’s broken rule after broken rule with her, and I’m not one for the government, really, (#F12 #DefundPolice) but I can’t help squinting and thinking “This isn’t really fair” when I consider all the trust her classmates and the teachers have put in her to follow standards meant for her and her peers’ own benefits, only for her to continue on as if she never plans to change from this. In Naruto, rule-breaking can mean refusing to let a comrade die in favor of retrieving a paper scroll. In ATLA, rule-breaking is generally simply not letting colonizers steal lives and land from aboriginals. But rule-breaking in MHA is legitimately threatening to oneself or their peers, the rules UA place aren’t ridiculous or corrupt or cruel like they tend to be in other series. It’s not the same at all. That’s why I feel she’s not being fair to her friends and teachers as a person, and as a character it’s iffy how much she gets away with because strangers are protecting her crying face when she goes to do things she knew beforehand that she shouldn’t be doing. Even with her brother, if she’s trying to be a hero, if she didn’t want to “snitch” on him she could at least try convincing him to stop, or offer to help him out with her old job since she’s be forced to leave it anyway, but instead she went along with everything with her own two hands. I’m chapters behind, but now I agree with Iida on that too. I guess it’s true that some people never teach themselves to be better unless they’re threatened with consequences after all…? Hm! This review’s already gotten kinda long so I’ll stop now.

Thank you for sharing this chapter with us.
Cheers!

Wow! Steamy sexy times, yeah! I kinda get your perspective that since she's never been properly parented Haruki might be a bit more hormone driven at times. Seeing as puberty can hit you like a truck.

Fun fact, Shindou himself has a girlfriend she's tatami nakagame

Love this! Great chapter! Glad she did well on her exam! Glad she made Bakugou a plate. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I love this story! Haruki is definitely one of the best OC’s I know! She has a great backstory and an amazing Quirk. I mean the idea of presence manipulation is genius! Although I clearly ship her with Bakugou, but it would also be kind of nice if she would end up with Shindou (I’m not sure if I wrote his name right) I hope you update soon;)

Haruki amplifying her presence in the likeness of All Might had to have been the BEST part of this chapter! The part where I go “Ah! She is a hero!” and the crowd roars with me. I liked it! It was also cute how she gave Shindou her digits and the other girls found it cute too. Hopefully she and Shindou actually do end up catching up for coffee or something sometimes, as friends or at least allies. Congratulations to her for getting her provisional license! Congratulations Black Cat!

Bakugou is on his way to start a kerfuffle with Midoriya, huh. I hope all turns out well! I don’t know if Haruki will be allowed to sneak over using her quirk and witness these ultra secret deets but it’d be awesome if she did! Even though they’d probably get mad at her…

Excellent writing!
Cheers!

BAKUHARU IS SETTING SAILLLL