. .CUUUUTEEEEEE! IM SO HAPPY FOR THEM BOTH, ALONZO IS FINALLY A STYX, ZEPHYRS GETTING MARRIED TO HIM YES YES YES YES YES YES YESSSS! 11/10 I LOVE IT!

OMG YESSSSS ALONZO FINALLY GETS TO BE A HAPPY BI BOI, THE MUMS BOTH SHIPPING THEN IS ADORABLE AAAAAA HOPEFULLY LINDZEY WILL BE FREE ONE DAY AND OMG YES HAZEL GETTING A JOB, A NEW PLACE, A DIVORCE BRAVO I LOVE IT! 11/10

YESSSS ALONZO IS SO DONE WITH HIS DAD, ALSO AAAAAA ZEPHYR LIKES YOU YA DOOF, HAZEL FINALLY GONNA DIVORCE HIS DAD YESSSSS :DDD I LOVE IT

POOR ROZZZZZ POOR NON BINARY CHILD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, ALSO YES ALONZO STAND UP TO YOUR HORRIBLE FATHER!

You know the dads a good antagonist when I want to jump into the fanfiction and strangle him, god I hate Alonzo’s dad so much, also aaaaaa Alonzo is so clueless that zephyr has a crush on himmmm, I see a lot of myself at like 15 in Alonzo and I’m just like dangit Alonzo’s dad just let him like boys and girls aaaaaaaaa 11/10 chapter :D

POOOR ALONZO AAAAAAA PRECIOUS BOYYYY also omg zach

Phew! That was a long and rough one! Poor Hazel and Alonzo... getting the brunt of his dad’s aggression.. and Hazel feeling so stuck makes it that much worse.. but then HE MEETS THE BOYS!

AAAAAA ZEPHYR AND AL ARE SO CUTEEEE YOUNG LOVE :’DDDDD alsoooo I WILL PHYSICALLY FIGHT HIS DAD JUST LET HIM SING CUTE LULLABYS TO HIS SISTERRRRR (great chapter aaaaa!)

ALONZO'S FATHER IS . what an abusive gas lighting douchebag ughhhhhh, atleast Alonzo is with Zephyr but man I hate that dude and man I feel bad for Hazel,Alonzo and Linzey, also poor Alonzo feeling that jealousy because his dad is the epitomy of toxic masculinity, I feel so bad for them aaaaaa! (once again great angst, ur writing is 11/10)

(This is Leo) HAZEL SWEET HEART, DARLING, UR IN AN ABUSIVE RELATIONSHIP AND YOU COULD DO SO MUCH BETTER :’((( ALSO THE DAD DOESNT EVEN APPRECIATE THE PURE ANGEL THAT IS ALONZO HOW DAREEEEEE (I am now part of the Alonzo and Hazel protection squad xD) such good angst aaaaa~!

I— I don't know what to say... I’ve been rendered speechless...

AAAAA POOR AL HIS DAS IS/WAS/ALWAYS WILL BE TERRIBLE IM HERE BY ADOPTING AL ALSO AS SOKEONE WHOS PARENTS GOT DIVORCED I RELATE TO AL SO MUCH AAAAAAA MUST PROTECC

I’m... so afraid of what’s to come in this fic.. but is-is that a ring box he’s feeling for? GASP!