I am really enjoying this story, and would lIke to encourage you to continue writing it to the conclusion you envision. My condolences for your loss. Grandfathers are special men whom we all look up to and follow as role models.

Excellent chapter, but some spelling errors still got through

I have a feeling there would be more resistance to taking the Skywalker children then Windu is aware of. I could see Plo not agreeing with it either considering the paternal feelings he has toward many individuals.

Take your time dear. Great chapter! I’m sorry to hear about your grandpa. Take care of yourself!

Ahsoka and Obi-Wan sticking up to them is satisfying because I feel like it's something they do. I hope you have the 501st (or Rex and Jesse) meeting Luke and Leia which would be funny. Lol

Great story so far !

Awww!

So what happens after this happy event?

I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Windu better stop plotting to take the twins from Anakin and Padme. Daddy has a lightsaber, mommy has a Nubian S-5 hand cannon blaster and is an ace shot.

Windu’s arrogance truly knows no bounds if he thinks Anakin won’t raze the Jedi to the ground to protect his children, and Ahsoka will be right at his side. God knows she has reasons enough to take the fight to the Council. I think it’s time Qui-Gon stepped in and gave them all a smack upside the head, otherwise we may still see order 66 be enacted.

Obi-Wan had better side with Anakin over the Council, because we all know Padme has enough connections in the Senate to make thing very difficult for the Jedi.

Mace Windu: "We gonna steal yo kids, Skywalker."
*Order 66 theme starts playing*

I had known something like that was going to happen. The fact that the Jedi is thinking they would be able to take the children away and believing Anakin, Obi-Wan, Ahsoka Padmé, (and the clones of the 501st? I'm not sure if you will have them meet the children?) will accept it is borderline arrogance. Rumor has it that Kit Fisto and Aayla Secura have some sort of relationship. Wonder if you will include that element.

Read all of this and I love it.

I bet you're gonna keep palpating alive, aren't you..?

What Happens Next?!

I cannot wait to see the next chapter!