Reviews for The Kingmaker
Allhailthesith chapter 4 . 7/18
Do you get any powers yourself or can you just give others powers.
What's the ultimate goal, immortality, godhood (a number of ways, becoming and endbringer, a power, a biotinker, becoming an entity somehow), world travel to fulfill these other goals?
Helg chapter 1 . 5/9
I wonder about 5 things:
First is: how your powers were buffed by Abba's shard. Will kingmaker target more people or wil give more pts or (really retarted) buff powers? Will copycat last longer or double range? Will hub give 50% power or double range?
Second is: Copycat on 1 km, really? It's non-Abba's range is 5 m. Did you mean power hub?
Third is: why negentropy and humble biginning? First is useful if you search for imortality, but your powers don't give it. Or endbringer transform may need one. Second is just dangerous - trigger is not guranted. And knowledge about trigger actually hinders it (reason why in cannon it's not widely spread).
Forth is: who are you. We don't know how protag lookes like, what his goals are, what is his strategy. Right now he's kind of grey - munchkin person without qualities.
Fifth is: Danny? Man is in early 20th, I thought he is in another city in colledge.
superpierce chapter 2 . 5/7
The paths you choose aren't set their more like guidelines. Just because your a villian doesn't mean you can't do any heroic actions or sell your services like a rogue.