I only just found this story! It’s very well written! Thank you for writing and sharing it.

Excellent continuation! Good work!

Only one critique. Third from last paragraph, you used "Hatchway's hands" instead of "Hathaway's hands." Might want to edit the chapter to change that, it steals from the moment of the storytelling.

Good storytelling, though.

Well done! Thank you for the Hathaway fic - wish there were more. This touched on a tough topic but it was well-written and quite believable.

That was incredibly powerful. Excellent job with pacing and the plausibility of the normal life up against the horror of James' experience and trauma. drip drip drip...really powerful