Very cute. I always like reading awkward Jaune beginning to realize his feelings. I look forward to more!

If you want, you could write a lemon for this story but have it be it's own story as supplementary content for this one. Like Cyanide Sins.

I've got the perfect names for their children! What about Cardin if it's a boy, and Cinder if it's a girl! No? What about Paris, regardless of the gender? No? What about Paul for a boy, Pauline for a girl? No?

Man I suck at naming the kids.

Nice story so far though.