Baby girl, you are a gifted writer and you just keep on writing till your hearts content. You are special and you should know that those who love you are on your side.

Proverbs 6

16 These six [things] doth the LORD hate: yea, seven [are] an abomination unto him:

17 A proud look, a lying tongue, and hands that shed innocent blood,

18 An heart that deviseth wicked imaginations, feet that be swift in running to mischief,

19 A false witness [that] speaketh lies, and he that soweth discord among brethren.

If more than one readers reads something a certain way eg: the cables the fault is in your writing not their reviewing. Just because something is in your head doesn't mean it's in the story (applies to both your recent fics). You would definitely (especially while without a beta) benefit from putting your work aside a few days then going back and rereading it to see if what you've written is...well that.

BTW - Motherhood softens women. Blech! exactly what century are you living in? It may change their priorities but not their personalities which was what that reviewer was commenting on.

Too funny the volcano Abby made, why am I not surprised the main ingredient was glitter.

Respect the reviewers. Not all reviews will strictly praise the work. If someone rightfully criticizes a portion of the writing, take it as a compliment that the reviewer has opted to spend their valuable time to help improve your writing.

Great chapter. Exploding glitter volcano. What a mess. Humorous.
Stay safe everyone and we are all in this together. Thank you for writing.

Ziva, Tony, and Delilah are VERY out of character here. You have Abby down. Is this really an Abby story with the others thrown in? One big problem is the volcano; electricity and glitter are a major fire hazard. It would not make a volcano but rather a bomb. Better to use baking soda and vinegar for a volcano.

Get a spelling and grammar checker please for your readers. Reading a chapter that is rife with errors is hard and by not checking these you are actually being disrespectful to the readers.

I really liked this chapter. Great story.

I love it! So cute :D

That was a good last chapter. Abby's got to be lucky Tori didn’t get electrocuted, using cables can be very dangerous.

And to the Guest reviewer, leave the author alone, I'm sure she knew that. And you come across as a very cruel person.

Any fool knows that the safest way to make a pretend volcano is to use baking soda and vinegar. And yes, you can use glitter with it. Having "cables" for power implies a lot of electricity. She's lucky she didn't have a dead kid.

DO YOUR RESEARCH

I love ️ how Johnny climbed up on the counter and the toaster oven! My brothers used to pull the drawers out and use them as stairs to climb on the counter!

Hilarious chapter. Daredevil for sure. What a mess.

Wow I love it!

OMG poor Delilah her son on the refrigerator, though I do have to hand it to the little guy.