Reviews for Baseball
Muse of Storytelling chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
*laughs uncontrolably* So funny! I love this style, the way we only saw the action througt Beast's dialouge and the rest was left up to our imagination. Please do more, it was so funny
Robbie the Phoenix chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
LOL! I was in stitches laughing at this fic. IT is absolutely brilliant.
koriaena chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
*snickers* oh, the poor poor guy. i suppose it was a good try, though. (NO! MORE RHYMES! AGH! *grabs head and runs screaming from the room)
A Pyro's Rage chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
Wow...this is great! I've never read one from this perspective before. This is awesome! This fic deserves a lot more reviews! You're an great writer.
Shawshank chapter 1 . 10/5/2003
Mwahaha, mutilating the all - American sport! Wait...are you American? Well, *are* you? If you are, I didn't mean to offend...please don't hurt me...I'll give you Canadian beer! No I won't, I'm not old enough to buy any...

Sorry, that's just me rambling. This was a hilarious fic! As Chaotic said, feel free to...uh...*experiment* with other sports, especially hockey! Heehee, I can just imagine Logan with hockey hair...

-Shawshank
Appin Took chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
That was hilarious! hehehe! Can I play?
HA chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
I think it's a realy good story and it's real funny, you should write more of thies stories like Baseball. Bye!
emptyaccount2011 chapter 1 . 7/1/2003
This is so funny!
Stefanie Knapp chapter 1 . 7/1/2003
*laughing wildly* Oh dear... That was TOO good! *applaudes* The style was very original. I don't think I've ever seen anything like this before. Good job! The interaction between the mutants was amusing, and because we only saw/read it from Beast's pov, it was all the more so. Makes one wonder what *exactly* they were doing, then imagination is used, and if it's an over-active imagination... *laughs* I really enjoyed this!
Chaotic Boredom chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I hate it when fanfiction doesn't post reviews. Anyway, I love this style, or story, or whatever it may be. You should do the same for other sports. SOCCER! LACROSSE! HOCKEY! You get the idea. :D
WormmonABC chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
*laughs* Wow, I would have paid big money to see that game.
Rubber Duki chapter 1 . 5/26/2003
Me likes

Especially the part when Rhane wouldn't let go of the ball .
Kashi-sama chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
Hey. i like it, but I think u should repost it with more spacing.
heath 999 chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
*on the floor laughing* Reminds me of the time when I read the X-Men comic book (can't remember which one) where they were playing "a little harmless game of baseball" and ended up in a pig-pile, very funny story!
Mischievous One chapter 1 . 5/25/2003
OMG! that was so hilarious! HA! almost called Rahne a bitch! That was ingenious! Loved it!
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