| Reviews for Amber and the Ink Machine |
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  Taryn chapter 1 . 7/18 OMG, PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS! |
| AnonymousWorld chapter 1 . 7/14 Please make more! This can turn into a great story! |
 TheMysteryperson1X chapter 1 . 7/12 Is there a date for when you upload the next chapter |
| Lunar Moon Butterfly chapter 1 . 7/11 You know how to create a compelling beginning! This story seems really interesting so far, keep up the good work! |
| Taryn chapter 1 . 7/8 PLEASE MAKE MORE CHAPTERS! |
| The ink stained poet chapter 1 . 5/5 Well done on writing your first BATIM story! So that was definitely a great start! The idea was very creative, and the transition beween Amber's home and Joey's was very well written and didn't seem forced at all. I like the spin on the letter that Henry originally received, you made it recognisable while still making it original. And the twist at the end...definitely didn't expect that. I'm very excited to see how this story plays out. Great work! |
