| Reviews for Of Focus and Mind |
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HollowFan chapter 2 . 5/29 Nice, I knew you are a quality producing to see more soon. Maybe 2 uploads per month maybe? |
Blu35tone chapter 1 . 5/7 You have a good start and I'm really interested to see you continue this if you decide too :D |
Small reader chapter 1 . 5/6 Wow,you did a really nice job as a new writer!I mean your story is compelling,but maybe try to focus on your grammar a little more.I hope you continue this series and I will follow you all the way through. |