Reviews for Minn Faðir
TheRandomArtFur chapter 7 . 7/22
YES THE POTENTIALLY FUNNY PARTS CAN COMENCE

also known as two Demi gods in one company, especially if they know both are Demi gods, is most likely not a good point in Shinra's favour

in other words Shinra might be royally f*cked now (excuse the curse I just don't know how to word it differently)
Beloved Daughter chapter 6 . 7/10
Oooh. Fascinating story premise! I can't wait to read more!
Scififan33 chapter 6 . 7/9
Pity Odin couldn't talk him out of it with the mentioning that the company does things they don't approve of. interesting start. How much will change with him being a demigod?
TheRandomArtFur chapter 6 . 7/4
YASSS MIDGAR HERE WE COME : D

The dud summon materia is a really neeto idea, and the Gods not viewing Shinra in a bright light is really understandable with all the shietty things they do, like killing the planet not caring who lives or dies unless it's the Pres or VP so yeah

Really well written I must say
TheRandomArtFur chapter 5 . 6/7
AAAAHHHHHHH HOW DO YOU MAKE CHAPTERS SO FRIGGIN WHOLESOME?

If that says nothing I really wanna see where this goes and I am very happy to read more, even if it tugs at my heartstrings a bit much
Kairitrion Cerulean chapter 4 . 5/23
What element is odin really? Non elemental? Darkness? Steel? XD perhaps RNG of wether or not he fucks up his enemy or not.

Would be hilarious if one day cloud gets a summon materia of odin, and have it miss zantetsuken, then complain to his dad about it
TheRandomArtFur chapter 4 . 5/23
Okay so I'm an idiot that forgot to review Chapter 3 but, it was really really wholesome and I love it to bits
Onto the Chapter 4 reviewD
Okay for one, also really wholesome, I wanna know if he tells Tifa or not so bad now D :
So uhhhh yeah that's my opinion can't wait for the next one!
Kairitrion Cerulean chapter 3 . 5/15
Cloud is really-really asking for the talk early X'D he's gonna regret that one day when he's older.

That was really sweet bonding moment with them on sleiphnir :D
JustLikeRandomStuff chapter 1 . 5/10
Odin : You a demi-god cloud
Dionysus : Yeah, half-god, half-mortal. Does no one watch the orientation film?
Hahaha I can't help not making that PJO reference.
I really love this story! FF7 fic with new concepts, this is really refreshing to read, can't wait for next chapter.
Kairitrion Cerulean chapter 2 . 5/8
Cloud almost asking for the Talk early X'D naive boy

I think you can use the next meeting with odin for an extended talk, the first time was a bit short.
TheRandomArtFur chapter 2 . 5/6
Just wanted to help a bit with the old norse since it's basically Icelandic :P
"Be strong/brave my son" would roughly translate to "Mundu að vera sterkur sonur minnyou would put an Og, our and, since he says it after something else) and "Thank you" can be translated two ways "Þakka þér fyrir" which is more a thank you for being here/giving me this thing and "Takk fyrir" which is more commonly used, personally him saying "thank you and I'll be sure to remember" would roughly translate to "Takk fyrir og ég skal muna það"

Yes the Sonur minn is the same for Faðir minn
I can try to help ya more through dm if you want, though I might not answer a dm immedeatly

Still a really good story
TheRandomArtFur chapter 1 . 5/6
Really good concept! The only thing I want to correct is that in Icelandic it's not "Minn sonur" it's "Sonur minn" other than that it's a really good story and it'd be really fun to play around with when he goes to join SOLDIER

-Zuky, some random Icelandic person on the internet
arashishizen chapter 1 . 5/3
Really interesting concept