And here begins the start of a new story. I’m so excited for this, I know you actually have this one planned so I’m waiting to see what you’ve conjured up in that head of your’s. I find it interesting, what you’ve already set up so far. It’s new and it’s refreshing, I like it. You’re introducing a dynamic that’s rarely seen here in the fandom (or at least with this ship) and I’M HERE FOR IT! And if I know of anything about you, I know that it’s going to be just fantastic. ;)

Surprising you don't have reviews yet, considering your other two stories. I'm pleased to be the first.
I've read your other two stories over the last few days, as well as this chapter, and I thought I'd leave my comment here, and I'm sure I'll do it in Enigma Girl, since you and your stories have been a beautiful discover.
As a fan of Annie, and of her being with Eren, I must say that you have hit the nail on the head with her personality, with her dialogues, with her reactions (let's be real here: stoic characters are the best!). The prose is neat, not afraid to escape the common word from time to time, with great visual power. I love the focus on the aesthetic details that so reinforce the imagery of your stories (maybe it's because I love to do that when I write: take that little moment, that little gesture or flash that conveys so much despite being so small).
The sentences vary in length; the writing is mature; the dialogues are faithful to the personalities of the characters we already know, so a lot of times you don't even need to tell us who's talking. To summarize: very good writing.
Thanks for the sweet reading that all these chapters have been. I really look forward to the next update of this story; an AU setting it's very interesting with AoT characters. I want to know how it will continue.