Hmm ... Avery is being attracted to Michelangelo, I like that! Although I would have preferred that Mikey kill Kai! How dare that bastard touch that girl? Damn bastard!
Well ... Leonardo is very lucky to have Mikey as a brother, if I were Michelangelo I would have kicked his ass for how I treat him, Leo realized his serious mistake and apologized to his little brother ... Mike is an angel He made peace with Leo, there were no fraternal hugs and kisses there, sorry, the reconciliation was fine. We will see how this follows

Por suerte los chicos han encontrado a MIKEY!
At last, they have found Michelangelo! his older brothers are happy ... too bad Mikey feels bad about Leonardo. Leo has finally realized what he has done with his little brother.
Dax will have allies after all.

I can't wait to see Kai get his butt handed to him. This has been an amazing read so far. Keep it up.

Aww I just loved the love scene between Mikey and Avery. And I'll admit that I felt bad for Jatari. But I'm also excited to see Kai get his but kicked by him, Dax and the turtles. And I hope that at least one of Mikey's brothers stays with him after this is over. Or that they are able to visit each other once in awhile.

Great chapter! That was sweet between Avery an Michelangelo. Hope to see an update soon.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Things are indeed getting really interesting.

I'm surprised. I didn't think I would like this story, but I did. It might have helped though that Mikey was seriously injured and missing for a while. Looking forward on where this story well go.

Oh no Mikey. poor Donnie going to be worried with guilt afterwards. Nice story so far.

What if he worship's and evil deity like Satan? If they have a good deity like Tandaya couldn't they also have an evil deity? Just a suggestion on how you could make him worse. I am beginning to enjoy this more and more.

Make him even worse still? You do that and he'll give the Roman Emperors a run for their money.

I. Hate. Kai! He is the absolute worst! I hope he gets what's coming to him soon. Still a really good chapter

If you make Kai any worse he'd be as bad as some politicians here in the US. I personally am embarrassed to be an american right now, and I can imagine that Dax and Avery feel the same way about their home and it's leader too.

Good! you have updated your story. I'm glad to hear that Leonardo is thinking how badly he has been with his baby brother. The portal has finally been opened and they have been able to transport themselves to that new planet. I'm thinking that a chain of relationships is coming! I look forward to the next chapter. I hope brotherly love between Leo and Mikey

This is getting interesting. I'm glad Leo is finally starting to realized how hard he was being on Mikey. And I can't wait to learn more about Kai's and Dax's back story. Not to mention Kai's younger brother and Dax's sister.

Romance, romance! Ahhh por suerte Miley se está recuperando del veneno. Ya nuestro ninja orange está sintiendo alivio y un poco de amor. Debe extrañar a horrores al maestro Splinter.
Ya estoy esperando la próxima actualización, por favor no dejes de escribir!