| Reviews for Reptillia28's Challenge |
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Yaw6113 chapter 17 . 7/27 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. |
suziq968 chapter 17 . 7/26 I'm loving this! Don't forget about Barty Jr. though. I can't imagine Harry just letting him continue to exsist and allowing the whole third task debacle. Also, very smooth how disowning Bellatrix will bring them the goblet. Does Lodic know Harry is a horcrux? I'd think if his destiny is so important he'd do something about that. Then they just have to find the diadem and probably can use the elves to search. Dumbledore deserves to find the ring though. So arrogant. Would have been a short story of Snape hadn't tackled the old git. |
Lordlexx chapter 17 . 7/25 I meant to add this on my review for the last chapter. A Regent wouldn't have the authority to disown a member. |
Lordlexx chapter 16 . 7/25 I really hope you know that "Regent-Lord" is contradictory. Either you are a Regent or you are the Lord, or Lady, as the case may be. If you were trying to combine the titles for House Potter and House Black, you should stop. It doesn't work like that. They are two separate entities despite them referring to the same physical being. |
kimjo2 chapter 17 . 7/24 Great story! I am loving your take on the challenge. I look forward to the next update. Thanks so much |
teachergirl chapter 15 . 7/19 As dentists, I hardly think that Hermione are going to be impressed by Harry inhereting $90,000. |
teachergirl chapter 14 . 7/19 I don't think you have the money right. JKR said that a galleon was about five pounds. This means you had Harry inhereit less 100,000 from his parents. That's not the kind of money to go crazy about. Plus, the Potter's were independenly wealthy. According to JKR, James didn't work because he was so wealhty. A measly $100,000 is not indepdendlty wealhty by any stretch of the imagination. |
teachergirl chapter 6 . 7/19 Snape was not in the least bit concerned about Harry when he found out Voldemorte targeted the Potters. He was only concerned about Lily. Don't be write revisionist history. It's not becoming. Snape told Dumbledore he didn't care of both James and Harry died; he only cared about Lily. Even though you want Snape on Harry's side, don't insult your readers with feelings of remorse that Snape didn't really have. |
D.Mentor chapter 17 . 7/17 A great story so far, thank you for writing, I can't wait for more. |
Rajiv A. Rajaram chapter 4 . 7/15 Interesting take on the prompt so far. Only thing I'm meh about is that Snape imo was wrong and always has been. Never liked how it tried to make him a victim whereas we never got positives for James, |
BratGirl1983 chapter 17 . 7/15 I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update |
amy chapter 17 . 7/13 loving this. more pls |
KittyWolfM chapter 17 . 7/14 Love this story couldn't put it down. Definitely looking forward to your next update. |
MotekElm chapter 17 . 7/13 very nice |
roon0 chapter 17 . 7/13 On the whole this is such a sweet chapter. |