This is an amazing and refreshingly different story so far! I'm hoping to see more soon!

fun to read

awesome start

So you actually chucked the plans for five chapters?

No way someone that can't tell when to use he'd instead of he's - like you do - is taking any kind of law class.

Stop with the fucking " 's " contractions. You're writing in the past tense, not first.

HAHAHHA I LOVE IT

I'm looking forward to whatever the next chapter gets finished. This has been a great story so far and it's well worth the follow :)

I love the way Harry's being portrayed. I hope you keep this... whatever it is that helped you write this chapter. I don't want to say it's being larger than life, but he's certainly got an eccentricity to him that made his conversation very interesting. Also, keep the Phil/Harry dynamic. It would be such a shame if you gave Phil the same treatment most other fanfics do and he just disappears. I'm much more interested in seeing him hang out with Phil than I am in seeing yet another story where Harry teams up with the avengers. It's been overdone to hell and there's not much originality to be had in that direction. At least that friendship would have a new feeling to it.

I like it so much please keep writing can't wait for the new chapter :)

Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more.

This storybis so unbelievably charming. Its just so fun to read.

Very interesting story! I look forward to more.

Love your story it has make me smile and laugh a lot.

Ggggggrrrreeeeeeaaaaaaatttooooooooooooo

Funny story :)