Thanks for the amazing chapter!

Awesome story! Binged through tonight but the loss of sleep was well worth it Looking forward to where you are taking your story. I especially like the focus and involvement of the sea folk. The original sadly ignores them completely save a few mentions...

Well, that was a very interesting fight. It was nice those seeds came in handy. Very curious how different will Percy’s meeting underwater in order to gain the pearls will be. I was thinking that it would be Triton who gives Percy the pearls, but based on the ending on this chapter, I suppose it won’t be? Also, I guess Percy will figure out Kronus plans much earlier than in the original if he knows/figures out who he’s talking to in his dreams? Still, I’m curious about how different will the events of the Heroes of Olympus books be compared to the original...

I’m kinda confused about the last part? But it was so cute to see triton trying to help Percy awesome halter I loved it great job

Loved this cliffhanger; it was a used a little too quickly in the book and never really got revisited. Congrats on your grade.

I love how you do research and it always pays off! This is really interesting!️️

Thank you, Tethys-ran.

I knew it! I knew they were like honorary grandparents to Percy!

Blooper number four should be the official one in the fanfic. It's funny and it makes sense.

Ye 100 is pretty small for a freaking cross country trip. Also Asian representation would be nice like South Asian or South East Asian. Middle eastern representation would be cool too. Anyway great chap!

Great job, as always! Hahaha poor Triton, Percy questing! I like Grover and Percy’s conversation, and Percy admitting he knew his dad is a sea deity (;P) and I like the inclusion of Pan being sensed! Can’t wait for your next chapter! Loving thesebiweekly updates!

Oop- 0.o

Well, that was interesting. Guess without killing Medusa, there's not much that can be done with the next chapter huh...I am curious to see where this Lara storyline will go and what will happen now.

I half expected Percy to be like “no, let’s take the poodle it clearly doesn’t like her previous owner”

I am sorry for your loss, but I was to say that I love your story and that you're doing FABULOUS work! I look forward to Mondays when I get to read another chapter. The story is just the perfect mix of the canon plotline with deviations from the plot line and characters. I've said this about a million times, but I need to say it again because it's the truth. Great work!