Oh yeah, some BAMF Danny. He can definitely out-McGarrett Steve but only when truly provoked. Otherwise he is capable of keeping his head about him. Nice job.

Great story. Nice pace and great that Steve brought up the cliff at the end.

Thank you to all the readers who have stuck through this story till the end. I didn't know if I wanted to leave the story here or continue with it but for now this is it. Maybe someday there might be a continuation to this story but no promises. Hope you guys enjoyed it! Thank you for all the kind reviews too, appreciate it much:)

This has been a great story. I would think Danny would need a month off after all that has happened. Sad that he was unconscious for 19 hours and scared Grace even more- poor thing. Their reunion was sweet though. She never gave up hope that he would save her. Funny that the team thought he had out- McGarretted Steve in the situation. I still think that Steve is the king of rule breaking. Glad that Steve could get Danny a free pass on all his law breaking activities- I am also glad he visited the thoughts Danny had of ending it all. I am sure it really scared Steve. Great chapter update. Love this story.

Awww! I love this story! I really really hope it isn't over, but even if it is, it is so wonderful! Danny and Grace have always had great on-screen chemistry, and in this story no different. It is so funny, seeing Steve reprimand Danny. By the way, Danny did not out McGarrett Steve. When he was put in jail? Steve took out the two EMT s in the ambulance, threw himself out of the moving ambulance, and assaulted an HPD officer and got his uniform. So Danny didn't do more bad stuff, he just did it more recently than Steve.

Lol those two(Danny&Steve) are the best. Can make a joke out of a bad time. And seems like Steve fixed all the things Danny did so he's not in any trouble.

Steve that wasn't a good idea to provoke him. Right now or in jail he probably has friends and he will come after you and Danny's family still. he wants revenge for his fathers death. And wants someone to pay. Poor Danny this isn't your fault. Sorry to say but its Matts fault he if never stole that money than none of this would be happening. Danny you need to listen to Rachael and anybody else that tells you this wasn't your fault. Maybe Grace can tell you.

This is awesome! I can't wait for what happens next, and Danny, Rachel, Grace, and Charlie, will get through this.

Great chapter! How is Danny ever going to recover from this emotionally? I can’t imagine seeing your child suffering so much physically and emotionally, and Rachel too. And to feel like the blame is all on you? Is Danny going to get the chance to be alone with Reyes? It is probably not a good idea - better let Steve and the team deal with him. It’s too bad Reyes is still alive - you can certainly see he will not stop terrorizing. Is Danny going to collapse from his physical and emotional trauma? It seems like he is near that. Thanks for the great update.

This is for sure a gripping story. There are so many things still to be answered. How severely is Grace injured and traumatized? How bad is the gunshot wound that Danny suffered? Will Reyes talk, and make things more complicated for Danny- I would think Steve will be able to keep him quiet. Or will Reyes escape somehow and continue to hunt & stalk Danny and his loved ones? What repercussions will Danny face due to all his crimes?
So glad Steve and the team were able to get to the warehouse, and to Danny and Reyes to save the day. It would have been a bad outcome for everyone if they were are few moments later. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Aw Danny got shot at least it wasn't Grace. And so glad the team finally got there and thy got to Emilio and handcuffed him. Loved when Steve and Lou both punched him. So hope there is no way to him to get out of this. Like the truth coming out that Danny shot his father. Then everybody will know.

Oh, no! I am so happy Grace and Rachel are safe, but now they gotta save Danny! My hope would be that Steve loses it, and takes his anger on Danny being shot out on Emilio, as he deserves whatever Steve and Lou can come up with, and much more. Can't wait for more!

I can imagine Danny doing all of that. He will stop at nothing when it comes to Grace. Love it that he took out multiple baddies. But very unfortunate that Reyes was not secured enough- poor Grace! Will she be able to recover- physically and emotionally? What did they do to her? I think the shot came from Steve...I hope. What repercussions will Danny face?

Danny was doing so good at being a badass. He almost got to Grace w/o any problems. I hope the shot was the team being there.

Oh wow! This story is soo exciting! I can't wait to see what happens next. My belief is that Steve shot Reyes. That would be my sincerest hope, please!? Update soon, if you can, please!