loved this can't wait for more and the headmaster has been too quiet...thanks and stay safe!

yoooooo this soo needs like a full book series!. I'd read it over and over and over
fantastic job!

Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

A very interesting beginning to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

Please write the next chapter already. Is the couple the flamels? Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Hi

Still enjoying the story so far. The elemental magic stuff is pretty cool- however, you might want to label the story as an Alternate Universe since you've got some really divergent magic compared to canon.

Also, I'm curious why Ron & Hermione are listed as main characters when it seems like Susan is much more important than either of them. Harry doesn't need them as his best friends when he's already got Pansy & Susan that he's known for years & obviously really close to... and personally, I'm always a lot more interested in exploring less popular characters rather than Hermione & the Weasleys always being in the spotlight.

Anyway, the dragon ceremony was interesting, and I really like the idea of Harry needing two wands due to the duality of his magic. Keep up the great work!

Great job! Not gonna pretend i understand all the frost and flame references but the ones i do are great! Also how will draco take harry killing his father? Is draco a black now? Or still a malfoy?

A couple of minor problems:

In chapter 2, Pansy's father was apparently named Gerald Parkinson, but here's he's named Alabaster.

Also, Pansy and Susan (and to some extent Harry) don't really speak like they're only 6 or 7 years old. That is understandable to some extent, but you might want to tone them down a bit from sounding too much like the adults they're around.

Other than those nitpicks, I'm really loving this.

Really interesting introduction here. The magical flames/elemental stuff is neat just on its own, but Harry using his own Phoenix flames to bring Danielle back to life is a cool twist.

However, a couple of issues:

1. A minor thing that you can easily fix- Moody refers to Danielle as "Andrews" instead of Strauss at roughly the halfway point of the chapter.

2. I have no idea why you decided to move the timeline up 20 years, but its a really bad idea. Most of the time people do that just so they can throw in pop culture references, smart phones, & crap like that, none of which is necessary. Especially for a story that will take place mostly (if not entirely) in the magical world.

even though i like pansy getting harry every now and then but get susan some to.
the tree together in this story seems right.
fire and ice and all that you know

MAYBE HARRY COULD BURN DUMBLES BEARD OFF, PLEASE?

nice story so far

Great story so far. Keep up the good work

REALLY Love this fic, it's truly unique. I'm looking forward to when Harry encounters Fleur for the first time, would be nice if they ended up together. Would be nice if Fawkes hangs around him more than he does Dumbdlore like during meals and things, i can see him flaming in for Harry's sorting.

question. can harry turn himself into pure ice and fire? or is it only control of the elements? if he can it would be epic if he used fire form to fly. also could he learn to do that frozone ice running thing from the incredibles? sorry for multiple questions but you make great books.