Reviews for Rising of the Straw Hat Pirate
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17
morrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeee
Game2002 chapter 1 . 7/14
So is this one of the stories with great potential, only to be abandoned after one chapter, or do you still plan to continue it? You're writing so many stories at once that I can't imagine this one being updated anytime soon...
Dcraus chapter 1 . 7/5
Fairy Tail and Rising of the Shield Hero
Naofumi Raphtalia and Filo joins a guild called Fairy Tail
Ramen is great chapter 1 . 6/26
And Naofumi Couldn’t use any kind of weapons, including Cannon, Bomb, or setting other on fire(anime did it wrong). If he throws a bomb it would drop on himself. Raphtalia isn’t strong like you made her be.
Ramen is great chapter 1 . 6/26
Rock Valley is the name of a village Naofumi own. It didn’t exist yet in the first volume of the light novel. And if Naofumi or Raphtalia travel across the world, their level will be reset. Raphtalia will become a kid again and Naofumi couldn’t use shields he already unlocked until he’s on the same level again.
chidoriprime chapter 1 . 6/23
This was cool! I want to see Luffy punch Bitch and Spear Idiot in their faces!
L chapter 1 . 6/12
And to finishes, if Naofumi gets some Devil fruits and feeds his shield with this, perhaps he could ends unlocking the devil fruit series, that could includes awesome skills and powers, depending of the kind of Devil fruit that the shield absorbs.

Though that considering the drawbacks of this fruits to consumed them, i wonder if the fact that the legendary shield absorbs and uses this new power, could causes similar side effects to its user; that Naofumi lost temporally the capability to swim, meaning that the Devil fruit series could be a dangerous power, like the curse series, as this powers have nasty side effects that could put in jeopardize the users, like the curse series that can corrupts Naofumi's personality and can affects and reduces all his stats, except defense, and the Devil fruit series could causes that Naofumi lost temporally the capability to swim, something very dangerous to him while he is near of the ocean, and as Filo isn't hear, Naofumi cannot counts with an effective lifesaver like her to saves him from gets drown, and doubts that the high defense of his shield can helps him against the asphixia.

Sorry by sent a lot information at once, but i am really excited for this story, as you made a great job with the first chapter, and i would likes to see this story continued someday.
L chapter 1 . 6/12
Regarding to the point of "Doctor-Hayden", i doubt that Naofumi already had his Wrath shield prior to be summoned to the One Piece world, after all Naofumi unlocked the curse series after the rigged duel against Motoyasu, to see how much plottings were against him in the rotten country of Melromarc, starting for the unfair treatmen of Trash king toward him, the betrayal of the Bitch, and learned that the Bitch is the daughter of the trask king, making that this awakes a great hatred and rage to Naofumi against everybody for be against him, and this activated and unlocked his wrath shield for first time.

But as Naofumi and Raphtalia ended transported to the world of One Piece before to the banquet after the second wave, is unlikely that Naofumi had the wrath shield to this point, meaning that the shield hero don't has access to the curse series, at least for now, because maybe could occurs another incident in the world of One Piece that would makes very angry Naofumi and he can unlocks the wrath shield in a different situation than the rigged duel against Motoyasu, like that during the battle against Mihawk, during the Baratie arc, Raphtalia also would tries to faces him and she ends severly injured and this awakes the anger of Naofumi to see as his companion was left to an inch of her life, making this a possible situation to Naofumi can unlocks the Curse series in the world of One Piece.
L chapter 1 . 6/12
Good crossover, i really like the way in that you put both franchises, especially as Naofumi and Raphtalia ends in the world of One Piece, at least they wouldn't deals with the trash king, the bitch and the three stooges for a long time, and instead, Naofumi and Raphtalia would have new adventures, that even could helps Naofumi to be more trustful, gets new awesome powers to his shield and gets new allies and true friends in the way.

Well, if the first chapter takes place during the events of the orange town arc, i wonder how the inclusion of Naofumi and Raphtalia in the crew of Luffy would changes the events in the next arcs, and how would be the interactions between the future characters that would joins to Luffy, like Usopp and Sanji.

In the case of the arc of the syrup village, i wonder how much events would changes by the inclusion of Naofumi and Raphtalia, and how would be their interactions with Usopp when they meets him and how would helps him during this arc.

In the case of the Baratie arc, i guess that Naofumi and maybe Raphtalia could be a little angry with Luffy for wrecked the Baratie ship, making that they ends indebted and forced to works for the restaurant during a time, and considering that they would meets Sanji here, and that he is a little womanizer, i wonder if Naofumi and Raphtalia could ends comparing Sanji as with Motoyasu, as both are womanizer blonde men, though that Sanji is far better person than Motoyasu, as he took the situations seriously, and isn't a retard. Also, if Zoro faces to the legendary swordman Mihawk, i wonder if Raphtalia would also tries to faces him, though that even if the Tanuki showed has some abilities that even Zoro admited that he lacks it, i doubts that Raphtalia can be a matches for Mihawk and she also ends injured and possibly get her sword broken if she faces him.

And in the case of the Arlong Park Arc, i guess that Naofumi could be angry toward Nami for stole their ship, and even he thinks that she isn't different to the Bitch as she decieved them and stole them, like the bitch did with Naofumi. But perhaps this opinion of Naofumi could changes, at least partially, when the group learns about the situation of the Cocoyasi village and the past of Nami, as this could makes that even Naofumi feels pity by her and even can understand her actions, making that now Naofumi see that Nami isn't even similar to the bitch, whom only cares by herself and even don't loves her family, in contrast to Nami whom was devastated for the death of her mother in hands of Arlong. Also, maybe when Naofumi and Raphtalia learns about Arlong and his crew, they could considers the fish men like demi-humans, making that Raphtalia can be enrage again for see this men tainting the good name of the demi-humans with their cruel actions. And also maybe during the part in that Luffy ends trapped in a rock and sunk in the water, Naofumi would support Sanji against Kuroobi, and Raphtalia would supports Zoro against Hatchan, making more easy to the protagonists defeats this fish men and can rescue Luffy more quickly than in the original story.

And to finishes, was a shame that Naofumi and Raphtalia were summoned to this world before they would buys the filolial egg of Filo, because Filo would be a very valuable ally to the crew of Luffy, as this poweful filolial is also a good swimmer, as she revealed during the cal mira archipielago arc, even with her great strengh, Filo would be a good powerhouse in the team, as she could breaks easily the shield of Pearl and the armor of Don Krieg, or even she could be whom rescues Luffy after be trapped in the rock during their battle against Arlong.

And as final opinion, if Naofumi and Raphtalia learns that they are in fact in other world, i wonder if they would be still interested in returns to Melromarc or would prefers to be in this new world, where both can have a fresh start, new adventures and even the chance of get true friends?

Keep the good job, i hope that you can makes a new chapter soon :)
FIRExNINJAxDROID chapter 1 . 5/18
Read solo lvling gurnetie u will love it!
Also what was your reaction to to those two being frans parents?

More on this story just wondering if u wanna add Fran and master in? It would be cool to see that
Also shield hero should absorb one of buggy’s parts to get the [USELES] splint shield!
Hercules8 chapter 1 . 5/18
This is an interesting story! A crossover with One Piece and Rising of the Shield Hero. I didn't think they would work together. But so far, it's pretty good.

I hope you will continue this. Keep up the great work! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
I can't wait for nafoumi and raphtalia to meet whitebeard and see what he's capable of or see the battle with zoro and Dracul mihawks

Though I have to wonder if you plan on having the straw hats come along with nafoumi and raphtalia when they inevitably return to melromarc will the other factors like the strongest pirates of their world also come cause it be pretty damn interesting to see how that world would handle the likes of Blackbeard,the shichibukai or kaido and big mom cause they're gonna be absolutely screwed without the straw hats to give them at least a fighting chance plus as three cardinal dumbasses would be utterly annihilated if they even fought the weakest member of the shichibukai but let's see how this already great story turns out.
thorison1080 chapter 1 . 5/7
Cant wait for more!
Treant Balewood chapter 1 . 5/7
Loved this! Really an excellent start, I'm happy i found it. Thanks for Writing! Ima go see what else you have.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5
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