Can totally imagine how terrible the atmospheres in the fourth-year girls dorms of all the houses would be, from this point up to the Yule Ball. Perhaps you would want to write a little on that.

Maybe some of the boys dorms too for those whose love-interests were lost to HP.

good chapter

good

OK, I think you need to go back and read the first book. Harry went into the bathroom to save her money in the first book. He did not go in the bathroom with the idea that he was gonna survive whatever happened, he went in there because Hermione was in danger and he wanted to save her. Unlike Jenny who open the chamber of secrets and petrified everybody and was a pure blood. Jenny knew better, her parents told her better, so in a lot of ways Jimmy brought her circumstances on her self. But Hermione was driven into danger by Ron’s actions. Jenny created her danger. If you’re going to do this at least try to make sense dude, no your fax, and plan out your story once you don’t contradict what the books say. If you’re going to use aspects of the book. Otherwise take it out.

So in summary, Harry and his would-be wives ...

0. (14, G) Harry Potter, parents James & Lily (both deceased)
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1. (13, G) Ginny Weasley, parents Arthur & Molly
2. (15, G) Lean Finnegan, parents Conleth & (unnamed)
3. (15, G) Katie Bell, parents Robert & Llinos
4. (14, G) Hermione Granger, parents John & Calliope
5. (14, G) Lily Moon, parents Alder & Anemone
6. (14, G) Sally-Anne Perks, parents (unnamed, not present) & Angela
7. (14, H) Justine Finch-Fletchley, parents Marcus & Allison
8. (14, H) Susan Bones, parents Albertus & Stella
9. (14, H) Megan Jones, parents (both unnamed and not present)
10. (14, R) Isobel MacDougal, parents Kentigern & Beitris
11. (14, R) Morag MacDougal, parents Kentigern & Beitris
12. (14, R) Sophie Roper, parents David & Mary
13. (13, R) Luna Lovegood, parents Xenophilius & (unnamed, deceased)
14. (14, S) Tracey Davis, parents Trolius & Cressida
15. (14?, S) Diana Runcorn, parents Albert & (unnamed)
16. (14, S) Daphne Greengrass, parents Castor & Lenora
17. (13, S) Astoria Greengrass, parents Castor & Lenora
18. (13, B) Gabrielle Delacour, parents Jean-Claude & Apolline (not present)

Total present at meeting: 45 [17 girls 25 parents Amelia Bones Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter]
Supportive of early monthly weddings per Cressida Davis' suggestion [26/46]:
1 (g), 3 (m), 5 (g,f,m), 8 (f,m), 10 & 11 (g,g,f), 12 (g), 13 (g,f), 14 (g,f,m), 15 (g,f), 16 & 17 (g,g,f,m), 18 (g,f,m),

First wife should either be the oldest witch, Hermione as closest to him, or random from a hat.

Sorry but wasn it supposed to also be a meeting between Harry and the others, this whole chapter neither Harry or the others have really spoken in fact they speak about it without really consulting the children, it is as if they aren't even in the room, as if Harry isn't in a room

surprised that you haven't had Harry tell his life story yet with so many lord's and the head of the dmle in the room he could get sirius a trial

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Looking forward to the next split chapter!
Thanks for writing.

This story is... Ridiculous. And strange. I don't really know how to take it. It's a well written Harem. As contradictory as that sounds. Like, it's also an over the top Harem. Like you just grabbed every female student ever, and then some. But it's well written and doesn't come across as a massive jerk off. But it's a massive Harem.

I'm so very confused.

Interested to see how you pull this off.

What a completely random genderbend.

good chapter

Good so far, nice to see different names than normal. Just wish the chapters were a little longer, but that’s just personal preference.

I have liked this story up until this point. Adding EIGHTEEN wives was ridiculous and just too much for me, so I will be leaving. Good luck.