Awesome side story. Looking forward to Mal0's future appearances. I can imagine she is not going to be happy with being separated from Fallen when they get flung into the world of Dragon(S)layer.

Ah, and so, we at last come to the end of this short, but fun tale. Almost sad it's ended.

This was an action-packed and fun ride. I wasn't that into the SCP universe before this, but you got me into it. Curse you! ;p

Mal-0 was fun, funny, cute and saucy, and the bit about where she learned that stuff had me laughing, as did their bedroom antics. I'll be giggling like a fool for days.

I also loved the comedy with Dischtill, and I could clearly imagine him screaming like a girl, and his discovery of their passion had me howling.
But I also liked the friendship and emotion there, and felt that Disch was a real friend, even if a salty one.

And the bit at the end. So, there is interdimensional treachery afoot. That makes me wonder:
Does the Fallen ever run across other Portaljumpers? I am certain more than a few would want him dead. Lots of room for action and feels there. Will be interested to see where this goes, in time.

A wonderful read, as always, and was a pleasure to read and have fun. Thanks for this wonderful story.

I am sad to see this story ending, I wonder if we will see more of Malo.

Speaking of big tiddy anthro women maybe a new story idea could be a big tiddy Fem!Blaziken/Fem!Lucario x Male OC, if not I understand, but anyways your works are great have a good day.

Fantastic work m8 I wish you the best of luck, stay safe and healthy and be sure to write a lot of big tiddy anthro women.

If you want to see a group that is actually evil then look up the Chaos Insurgency. Those guys are just completely crazy to the point even they dont know what they're doing besides 'chaos!'.

Well Dischtill is at least still relatively unharmed from the assassination attempt, although I hope him and the Fallen have another bunker hidden somewhere else or at least a hideout that’s mostly intact. We also see an interesting development from the Foundation as with the reveal of their mech suits and a little foreshadowing on what’s to happen in your previous story, and I can’t wait to find out!

On a side note, have you ever heard of Worm by John C. “Wildbow” McCrae or Hellsing? I would recommend you check them out if you want to include them in a little short story or just for your own enjoyment!

This was an amazing chapter, start to finish.

The conflict within the Foundation itself was a nice touch, and felt real. I doubt that is the first time Maxim has killed a commanding officer he didn't like. Very chilling.

The bits with Mal-0 were twisting, and you never quite knew just where she stood. I liked your acknowledging the canon, how she was made to be an intelligent friendship AI for those who are lonely, social outcasts and the like. Maybe her appearance was a well-intentioned attempt at "don't judge a book by its cover". I REALLY liked that, about how she has tried to SAVE people, not hurt them. Sadly, we can be panicky, dumb and emotional beasts.

I also liked them saving Dischtill, and his loss that was alluded to was powerful. I could see Mal-0, upon learning of that, softens to him. She really is a sweetie.

Now, I had an idea pop into my head about her past, and if you can use it, go right ahead, if not, no biggie:
Seems to me she would have wanted to help any person who needed a friend. But younger people would have been less scared of her. So, the idea came to me she could share a story from her past with the Fallen, of a human child (little boy in my mind, but could be a girl) who was depressed, lonely and scared with no friends. Mal-o became their closest friend, and learned it was their own mother who was abusive to them. When Mal-0 protected her friend, and revealed herself in full, she made the mother see how she hurt her child, how scared they were, how they hurt.
Seeing her vile self revealed in all its worst glory, she took her own life. That was not Mal-0's intention, though. Sadly, she was taken away and never saw her little friend again.

Now, that may be something you could use, maybe not, or maybe use parts adapted. I only offer that as a fellow writer.
I also figured, if she and Cynder ever meet, maybe their disdain for hurting children becomes a point of friendship?

Wonderful story, so glad to read more of it from you, and looking forward to more of your wonderful works.
Your writings may not seem like much to you, but to some, they are a shining highlight in an otherwise dark day.
Thank you for taking the time to write and publish your wonderful stories and artwork.

One thing to note is that as bad as the Foundation is (and they've done seriosuly messed up stuff) is that they are not evil. Every bad thing they have done has also saved the world in the process. The things they contain are much worse than they are. Just look up scp-106 or scp-953 or scp-993 for a few examples. And thats not even getting into the world-ending (or reality-ending) threats they've contained. In the scp-verse there is always somebody worse.

Dischtill needs a fucking hug, man.

Not from Mal0 though. Boobies are reserved.

Fucking love these chunky chapters.

Very interesting. If the original scp-1471 file on mal0 is found then they'll discover that people have died via suicide after downloading the mal0 app from the constant attention it gives. Funnily enough, the communication between mal0 and users is pretty terrible, which combined with the fact people have died from using the app, give mal0 a bad image.

Have you thought of adding a female SCP-682 in the story if you decide to turn it into a harem, if not I understand, regardless thank you for writing and stay safe m8.

Well, I can see you’ve done some reading on the SCP universe and this chapter is good and ended with a nice conclusion, but while reading this story I was wondering if the Fallen could make an appearance in Trever Henderson’s universe or over in SpaghettiBastard’s BONEMEN universe if your interested in featuring them in a story. I recommend you check them out if you haven’t already.

I liked the chapter!

The SCP verse is large will the GOC or other Groups of Interest show up?