um hello, this is really good!

I have to admit that I am a bit anxious for Rin and Len, I feel like something bad is going to happen in their relationship. Everything has been going so well for them, a little too well. I swear each chapter I hold my breath in case they break up or something. Plz don’t do this to me my heart can’t take it.

Also I feel like Yuuma might have some issues regarding Miku’s death. Ok that’s stupid, anyone would, but what I like is that you make it clear that while he loves his daughter, he’s also using her as a vessel for Miku. With the hair in pigtails and reluctance to let her cut it off, I really hope you decide to do something with this. I can really see this being an interesting plot point as Gumi grows up and tries to form her own identity.

Gumi is also very enjoyable. I can see her progress in terms of character throughout the story, and I am can’t wait till she hits her teens. I just feel like with all the family drama happening she is going to be in a rather tough spot. She will have her own options and values by then and I wonder how the dynamic between her and her dad will shift.

I have listened to the song therefore I know what the ending will probably be like. However even with that knowledge I still stress about what each chapter will bring, (you adding that you are going a little off script certainly and not helped me in that regard). By the way that was supposed to be a complement. Seriously I just wanna say you have executes this fic really well, and I really hope you continue writing even after this story is done with. Take your time there is absolutely no pressure, the creative process can often be ridiculous with its consistency matching that of an old women’s period, but I’m really excited for where this is is going.

Ok excessive rant over now, apologies for any grammar or spelling mistakes, byeeeee!

Right on

I like the letter format.

I really love this story! I just started reading it a couple days ago & I'm already so invested in it! Keep up the great work!

This is so cute! Hope to see more. How old is Len?