Reviews for Reverse side: rearing a child in the Garden of Avalon
gamaiunova.tanya14 chapter 1 . 7/23
Отличная история надеюсь на скорейшее продолжение. Всего вам хорошего
Foxie3366 chapter 3 . 7/17
Please update soon this is a great story so far
Adrian Garrido chapter 3 . 6/22
Will you update Is it wrong to be a Hero in a dungeon?
Shulkxmelia23 chapter 3 . 6/19
While I truly due love your story idea I just can't seem to get into it. I don't know exactly what it is but I just can't. I do wish you luck with it though and hope you have a nice day.
MysticRising chapter 3 . 6/19
I want to say this, but it seems silly for Harry to have structural analyses. Shirou and Kiritsugu used that spell frequently and thus have a high affinity for it. I know nothing about Waiver but I don't think he would be capable of using a mystery like that to it's true potential, much less train someone. It also is a fairly broken skill and should be kept to Shirou to balance out with his very limited skill set.
That comment of 'distortion' also scares me (from Grey). Please, Harry is fine as he is. Let him grow naturally. A reality marble is pushing a reasonable OP story into bullshit trash territory.
I must also express disappointment with Dumbledore. You had a wonderful opportunity to change him, for him to realize the error of his ways, and he ended up repeating his ways. It's fun to express our dislike for characters, but I think doing so limits how we can develop them as characters. 'Bashing' writes them out so one dimensionally. And I think he should confront mcgonagall to be mollified as she seems more reasonable and harbors doubts on Dumbedlore's reasoning.
MysticRising chapter 2 . 6/19
You know generally I hate OP Harry stories, they seem so... fake. But this one seems so well built. Harry trained for 10 YEARS, not some bullshit like 1 day. While we did not actually see anything, the story glossed over such lessons, we KNOW harry's lessons included experiences that would culminate in his strength. I think this is also a very good way of introducing new magic into the HP verse, and thank you for making his arrival to the gardens accidental and not some bullshit like 'he is the chosen one with a random connection to the fey'.
Now, I must say it is quite stupid how Harry decided to get caliburn shards and merlin's blood for his wand. It would sound more personal and intimate if Harry's wand had his blood and I think it's insulting if another is capable of working/altering caliburn's shards. This may just be my bias as I love saber, but it does seem silly for just about anyone being able to mold a noble phantasm of that level. But fou's hair sounds like a good addition.
I also want to smack Waiver. First off most magi know the old magecraft is vastly superior, not to mention magi culture is very racist and scorn modern innovation. Magi aren't superior, they close themselves off on purpose. This doesn't apply to all, but for the most part it does. Not to mention he doesn't know much about the HP magic yet so it seems so judgmental to make biased comments on a magic system he knows nothing about when they make advancements vastly superior to his own people (ie they can teleport when magi can't). Be judgemental over how they constrain themselves to modern advancement like his own people, or their lack of true understanding of their magic but not over their system itself.
And again why would modern magecraft be superior? The whole point is to regain magic to the level it was previously not advance magecraft (or true magic). So I dislike Waiver's role very much.
Overall I think the role of Waiver and Zeltretch sounds very stupid. Maybe it will develop into something, but the story sounded like it had a very solid premise before their introduction. They sound like their just here to empower Harry and not in a good way, but in a very obnoxious way that seems totally unnecessary.
Sultan Asil Arslan chapter 3 . 6/13
This is awesome but a bit disappointed that Gray will be a big sister instead of a lover :(
Fagger chapter 2 . 6/4
Fuck you! Die YOU toxic piece of a shit writer!
Knight of Fire chapter 3 . 6/3
It’s been some time since I’ve last seen something like this. It’s a good premise, though I feel you’re rushing a bit at times, leaving out a few parts, though I can see why you might do that. The only other complaint is grammar, which isn’t too bad.
Acolyte of the Blood Moon chapter 3 . 5/31
Interesting story you have here, the occasional grammatical errors or typos are a bit bothersome but not too bad. Very interested in where you will take this!
Dasgun chapter 3 . 5/31
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typersnyder chapter 3 . 5/31
Can’t wait for the next update!
Sagiri D Goku chapter 1 . 5/31
Will you make Harry and Gray a pairing or will it be big sister and younger brother for them?
Sagiri D Goku chapter 3 . 5/31
Will you make Harry and Gray a pairing or will it be big sister, younger brother for them?
Sayians4ever chapter 3 . 5/30
I apologize for my bothering you.

Now onto the review.

This incarnation of Harry Potter is not exactly the same, more withdrawn than his usual self but also like anything else he is also a bit of a nerd. I like it.
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