I don’t like the ending of this chapter. Naruto wouldn’t leave someone he cared about behind like that. Yes he can be brash and an idiot but something like this he’d tell her about, and then probably ask her to come with him before promising to return to her if she said she couldn’t come.

wow friend ... really impressive and intriguing ... as a chapter you really amazed, pee please continue the story

man, human form of Onyxia is so hot I'm getting chills.

intriguing, interesting and imaginative ... really well done chapter. Continue this step that you are doing well

Continue the story that is becoming very interesting and intriguing, you are doing well from here

excellent chapter keep it up,

well as you said the drama of the last 3 chapters have ruin it ... our mc is a immature brat who thinks his choices can go away with the power of im sorry i really do love you blabla.. no i had to really force myself to read trough the last chapters ... he is way to immature... i would have loved it if it was the original naruto who went to azarot instead he had time to mature and stuff like that ... but this mc is just a copy of naruto all the things he can do is just a weak copy of his father the original naruto way to much bullshit for no reason to explain mc reason to exist blablabla really thought we could get a good story for world of Warcraft but it seems its on the same standard as all the others.. just barley mediocre

what can I say? It just continues that the story has too much potential to be left hanging, which proves to be too interesting, intriguing, fabulous to stop it, so the story goes on, that so far you are doing great

You make unneeded Drama

you're going great Dude, keep it up

I have to be honest, Naruto would look perfect with Jaina as main pairing...

uh future love story between Naruto and Jaina? Who knows where this love will lead, for the rest the chapter is excellent and well done and the dialogues you see that you are improving on them, for the rest it continues so friend that you go great

to much damn drama about past memories we dont really give a fuck about his past .. only the part where he migh be a giant lizard .. the rest about his time in naruto world is so fucking boring we have read 100000 stories about his diffrent life there we dont really care anymore haha

keep it up you're going to the great friend

Great crossover