Reviews for Superior Legacy
LegendaryMob chapter 4 . 14h
Wow this is good.. It's pretty well written and has its own significant depth unlike those other bnha x spider crossover who just went and replace peter with izuku yet have the same old parker luck issues. And as bonus, this izuku has an actual intelligence instead of just calling him smart but does idiotic things anyway.

Overall, it's been a really excellent reading experience so far. A fic deserving to instantly be added to Everyone's Favorite and Follow list.

On the other note...

First, I like that izuku is already building his own pseudo- vigilante/Hero organization. His very own Pillars of Hope.

Don't get me wrong... I like solo play but solo play has its own limit and sooner or later will get incredibly harder cause of the accumulating enemies. So... Giving him a team deserves a thumbs up for me.

(Here's my potential recruits:

Dabi - Legal revenge against endevour
Crawler - He move's like a spider on Land
PopSteps - Crawler's partner and redemption for what she did in bnha illegals
Toga - If she awaken her quirk
Gentle - He's wuirk is useful but he sorely lacks training
Aiba - Recruit for Doc Ock not for team for her technology prowess

Done, Honestly most potential recruit came from Lov vanguard team)

Second, can't help imaging this izuku joining the spider-verse. Wearing his superior suit only to be mistaken as doc ock then gain redemption as his successor.

Third, what do you mean "Izuku falling to darkness"?... Is he destined to follow the OG superior spidey's footsteps? Will he turn into a villain? Or just a morally struggling hero or an Anti-Hero? Cause i'm not looking forward for this fic to go the villain route.

That's all, thanks for the chapter and hope for more!
Lance Eterna chapter 4 . 7/10
How about Dabi?
TeamDimension8 chapter 4 . 7/8
I'm very impressed with this chapter. The story as a whole is pretty unique, and has consistently good dialogue and narration. There are obviously some bugs and an awkward line here ir there, but they're pretty rare.

Izuku's interview/interrogation by the Commission was everything it needed to be and more. Usually in these type of scenes the MC is a mile ahead in the contest of wits, so it's refreshing to see Izuku caving to the pressure a bit.

Another standout scene was Twice's introduction. You used his split thought process extremely well, and it didn't even feel awkward or jarring. Izuku's mini-speach about using people was in character, but seems like he's slipped to the dark side way faster than one would from the start of his training.

That being said, outstanding chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.
Caelus06 chapter 4 . 7/8
great story ! the path to hell is paved with good intentions.
UnlawfulGentleman chapter 4 . 7/8
Wow. Okay, so I really liked the ending there - it really manages to show off Twice's state-of-mind and just how hellacious it must be to actually BE in the man's proverbial shoes. He has absolutely no peace, no sense of surety whatsoever, constant and crippling stress, a thick undercurrent of uncertainty and a maddening feeling of frustration, of second guessing himself because his own Quirk caused an entirely understandable mental breakdown, a huge existential crisis that's hung over him like a rain cloud.

Excellently done and easily the best take on Twice that I've read yet.

Which is why I enjoyed the last section so much, because for all that Izuku's changing and for all that recruiting Twice helps him, it still shows off the core of Izuku's character which is wanting to save others. And no matter the treatment of Twice from here on forth, Izuku has absolutely saved the man. Which is something that'll definitely effect the Superior Seven's dynamics. I imagine Jin will be unflinchingly loyal to Izuku and potentially even a good friend, if Izuku/Ock lets that happen. It's all very cool, to say the least and has me eager to see how that works out.

But that's also an interesting contrast to the Izuku hanging out with the Aldera students, since although he connects with them somewhat and has fun the experience is somewhat soured by the way it ended. Not necessarily pushing him away from people his own age but reminding him of the fickle nature of society and how he wants to fix it. An interesting loop, one that leaves me curious if U.A. will do anything to mitigate it or if instead it'll make it worse, making Izuku even more dedicated.

Oh and apparently Ock's still doing Ock-like things if he has 'bots running around, kidnapping criminals and stuff so that's interesting.

The Hero Commission? Also impressed. Some damn good worldbuilding around them, a fairly obvious display but one that works quite well given their place in society and Izuku just nailing his induction into them which should make the upcoming chapters plenty interesting, not to mention his eventual application and acceptance into U.A. (which is much looked forward to at this point). Some good characters in there and just a sense of things going exactly to Izuku and Doc Ock's plans, which is enough to inject just the right amount of worry.

In all, a fucking awesome chapter from start to finish. As for suggestions for the Superior Seven . . . I'm not going to lie. If Stain could possibly get rebranded back to Stendhal, he'd be an amazing choice for them especially if they can reign in his murder-boner. If someone from 1-B's to make it in (since Izuku presumably covers 1-A), I'd say either Ibara Shiozaki or Sen Kaibara. Shiozaki's got a powerful Quirk, one useful for a variety of situations from combat, to rescue, to capture and outright destruction although whether or not her personality would allow for her to work for the Superior Seven's a mystery to me. Kaibara on the other hand has an equally powerful Quirk that'd be good for just about the same as Shiozaki's but it's much more in-your-face and less likely for mass destruction of property. Plus he seems far more likely to understand the necessity of the S7 and more likely to join, as well.

Looking forward to next chapter!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/8
Adjective was to listen to Shigaraki, and I can see him be the powerhouse of the team.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/8
Mmm I know some people have been asking for Toga and Stain but I doubt there would be right for the team if Otto suggest them, sense because those two are way unstable beacuse Toga is just too crazy to trust and has been killing people just cause and she wasn't push to the villain life she push herself in, and Stain well if you seen the vigilante spin off then you can tell that his ideas were made out of crazy logic I mean he change opinion all cause someone told him he was wrong and automatically change his opinion.

If any villain should join in the sinister 7, it should Gentle, La Brava, USJ Nomu. Gentle beacuse he was screw over by the hero society and all he ever wanted to do is help, heck most of his crimes are just him hurting irresponsible people that are greedy or don't care of the safety of others. For La Brava well she screw over by appearance and correctly me if my wrong but has ANY of the pro hero's ever or try fix that problem no they have not and sense she with Gentle is pack deal. As for the USJ Nomu well is rather simple his mindless and I can see Nomu listening to Izuku as soon as his abandoned as his main
warrior of six blades chapter 3 . 7/8
So Otto has been making some great chess moves to further Izuku's growth into being the Superior Spider-Man by having him run charity in giving out medicine, food, and blankets to those in need in Habuhana. The poor woman even speaking up in Spider-Man's defense making it hard for heroes to really TRY anything without making themselves look bad given he was the one cleaning up things when no one else is.

Getting Hawks on their side is a HUGE boon and I can see Izuku's honest desire to help and change things being KEY in this to convince him. Now all Izuku and Otto needs is to make a team for Izuku to better make connections for becoming the Superior Hero who will change things for the better.
warrior of six blades chapter 2 . 7/8
Otto was wise to use Field Patrol as a way to help Izuku have the push he needed to accept his power and not fear it after his awakening of his Spider-electro venom blast on Bakugou. Man I was glad to see the prick get something back for all the crap Izuku endured.

Though it seems Izuku is quickly learning WHY Bakugou feels so damn entitled, now that he has power and everyone in school knows it, they treat him better, kinder, and with respect. Even overlooking his fight with Bakugou.

Truly, they are all such tools and pricks, but at least Izuku no longer fears Bakugou anymore. Even earning an admirer without realizing it.

But Izuku's fight with Moonfish was JUST the push he needs to understand the Duty he now has to uphold his responsibility that comes with his power. Now he has the resolve and acceptance in his heart for the power he carries, to use it to help those in need of a hero and not hold back in fear of his power, but to embrace it for all that he is.
ndjjdjsujsj chapter 4 . 7/8
How about kendo rappa or gentle criminal they seem level headed enough
Guest chapter 4 . 7/7
Can you make Mineta into a decent human being instead of being a pervert all the time? You can give him a pitiful backstory about why he became the way he is, such as an abusive father or late mother who didn't give her son the opportunity to teach him how to respect women. It's just that despite how annoying he is due to his perverted attitude, he's still just a child trying to fit in to society but his methods of doing so are not helping him. Please give him some character development just like how you're giving some villains some development.
warrior of six blades chapter 1 . 7/7
I must say, Otto picking Izuku truly makes sense as they both had been treated like dirt by the world around them. Only while Otto became evil and unable to see how twisted he was until sometime after he became the Superior Spider-Man, learning of how Spider-Man has the heart of a hero and was something he himself lacked despite all his smarts and skills with Peter's body...Izuku on the other hand despite his powerlessness was willing to risk his life to save the same bully who made ten years of his life pure hell.

Not going to lie, that's not an easy thing to imagine doing, but it would be done...reluctantly. If I was in his shoes.

All Might crushing Izuku's hopes like that made me feel for the boy and Bakugou's cruel words made me sick to my stomach that he was allowed to be such a dick to Izuku and never have it haunt him during his hero training at UA. Honestly, Izuku gets the short end of the stick so freaking much by the world in how so many treat him at first it's sickening.

Now, he's got someone who not only believes in him and is willing to help him, but trusts in him to be granted a power worthy of a soul who is a true hero down to their core like Izuku is. I look forward to seeing where this path leads Izuku.
Dased22 chapter 4 . 7/7
Shigaraki is gonna be pissed at his shitty prospects for a league of villains. Cool chapter mang
ndjjdjsujsj chapter 3 . 7/7
Dope
Karlos1234ify chapter 4 . 7/7
Outstanding chapter.
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