Reviews for Naruto of the Four Elements: Book of Fire
DragonOfApocalypse chapter 1 . 4/29
I like the summary
But I’m confuse with the actual story, Kurama is saying that benders have been missing for a more than a thousand years.
And in your summary your are saying Aang die TWENTY years early, SO by your summary I expected for Naruto to be replacing Korra in the LOK timeline, and maybe be paired with Asami
Anyway, can you please explain so I can understand?
Please?

Thank you for your time!
Have a nice day!
Tygreezy25 chapter 1 . 4/27
No naruhina is so overplayed
PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 2 . 4/26
Agreed and trust me I get the same problems with my fanfics too I just choose to ignore the comments now from guests
Branwen Yang chapter 1 . 4/26
Oh and the Mizuki incident bc let's be real he hates Naruto and tricked him but would that really count? I don't even know lol.
Branwen Yang chapter 1 . 4/26
It's not a bad start though the only things I'm a bit salty about is how short this chapter is and the fact you do that whole people trying to kill Naruto thing, Naruto was never attacked by people growing up like Gaara, he was hated and feared sure but never had they attacked him ever. I think the closest he ever got attacked was two times I think and that was the mask vendor man and the bullies Naruto tried to beat up bc they were bullying Hinata. I have a feeling if anyone were to try and attack him then Hiruzen or even ninja who understood the seal used which by the way was an Uzumaki sealing jutsu so strong that cost the user their life. Minato was a seal master my dude he was up there with the Uzumaki when it came to that art and a lot of Ninja knew that. Though that didn't mean some people weren't worried about the seal possibly breaking but they never hurt him physically. Other than that good job on a fantastic chapter, though maybe you can do a Naruto/Hinata pairing? Or maybe Kurotsuchi or some female from the Mist? Maybe saving Pakura from being sacrificed by her own village? Who knows but I really liked this chapter.
PinkiePieParty122894 chapter 1 . 4/26
Love it :)