Like the pairing

I like the Chronos ability tossed in there. Smite is a great game. Fat Loki is the best (Actual Loki can burn in Tartarus).

Wow, really really like this story. Please keep this up author you're awesome.

PERTEMIS

Pretty sure Pertemis is a pretty close second for most popular pairing. I honestly find it a bit disturbing and slightly misogynistic. Its like the people who write Percy/Artemis are saying Artemis is only a man hater because she hasn't found the right one to tame her.

Just found this story and loved it. Thanks for writing and I hope that there will be more to read.

I love what you did with Aphrodite, they always make her some sex crazed mega b*tch when she's the Goddess of Love not Sex. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

ugh.. this whole story is feel like massive plot armor..
his lvl is too low.. and he fight with GOD.. ughhhh...
his stats is super low too.. just look at luke.. he have more stats that percy..
and percy decided that it is good idea to do the quest..
while he is super under lvl..
ugh...

Keep Up The Good Work.

Liked the chapter.

Big fan of the ancient Greek cultural norms coming up and confusing Percy. Hopefully he ask for help with that before going to his father's house.

The gamer stuff was handled well. Readers can burn out if you have Percy constantly antagonizing over every selection and only telling us his final choice or focusing on the selection where it has plot implications is the way to go most of the time. In the future he may make choices that could anger certain gods, weapon conjuration and anything lightning based could immediately offend two who are not his fans.

The gods were good this chapter especially Hestia who was awesome. Percy is gonna get the hell beat out of him when he ask how Aphrodite is not permanently married to Hephaestus, she just explained in a round about way, no child, dissolvable marriage.

You play Smite don’t you! I know where Accelerate is from ;)

Uber awesome chapter. The eye thing seemed cool but then the last condition seemed to limit this to just Luke Castellan. Why would a monster that had pushed Percy past all his other limits be resigned to their fates and how would Percy know if that were the case. It just seems like an easy way to lose an eye. He could have said literally anything like unless I have no weapons in my hands or unless I believe myself to be just. It's good that you've set it up as an ace in the hole but resigned to their fate was too specific now anyone without a death wish could cause Percy to lose an eye. Looking forward to the Atlantis arc. I also hope to see Aphrodite grow as a character. To truly be Percy's girlfriend some sort of combat potential is necessary. I think someone that is willing to stand and fight for their love is a true love and I think Percy agrees with me on this. I know the subtle powers of love are more up her alley but you just can't seduce or talk your way out of every situation. A bow and arrow is a classic for love deities. It would also annoy Artemis. As an alternative Aphrodite is strong and love isn't always subtle. I think a War Axe named Heartbreak would be even more awesome than a bow and arrow. I'd say hammer but that's right up Hephaestus' alley so probably not a good idea. Wow really went overboard here definitely one of my longer reviews.

Another great chapter, thank you for posting it!

Glad to see Percy is being smart with his choices. He chose some good perks that work together. Thanks again!

This is so good! Keep going!