Good story. Communication is the key.

Former English teacher coming out:
your: possessive- your book, your hat
you're: contraction for you are- you're talking now

there: place- put the book there
their: possessive- their reunion, their house

barley: a grain
barely: just a little

concrit: hope you take it as just being helpful

Wonderful story

Fabulous writing. Ziva is finally truly opening up with her fears with Tony. Tiva forever.
Thank you for writing.

Excellent writing. Can feel Ziva''s anxiety and Tony's. It is a stressful situation. Tiva forever.

This was really wonderful. A few spelling mistakes but you get Ziva's anxiety and Tony understanding her perfectly. This is exactly how I'd imagine their reunion to be. Thank you for a fascinating first chapter

Wow! Your fanfic is AMAZING! Please, write new chapters :) !

Now that was the talk those two needed the angry, hurt, yelling, crying and peace. I am sure there will be more of it, nothing worth while is easy and those two never did anything easy.

This is how I pictured their reunion, joyous, sad, little anger, regret, loving and a lot of baggage to sort out for both of them.

Awesome story, I could imagine the reunion happening just like this. I definitely think you need to explore Tali’s reactions to not only having her Ima home but also for the first time to having both parents around and the three of them navigating being a family.

Love this! But in canon Ducky was Grandducky to Victoria. I hope you write more of this story though! Great job!

beautifully written. heartbreaking ... but you have perfectly captured how I imagined the reunion would be with Tony, Ziva and Tali. I really hope you continue this story :-)

I like it. Is it going to be multi-chapters?

Great work