This is fantastic! I’m really surprised you didn’t make it a multi-chapter fic. Can’t wait to read more of your writing!

Still waiting for more, it's amazing !

Loved the story bro!

The dialogue is well done and tell the story so that it can be picture even when the action is not explicitly described.

I'm actually rather impressed on how Maddie managed to wrap her head around all the revelations and emergency situations and act quickly and cleverly. But it rather left thing hanging and wondering if perhaps Danny's next revelation might be just one thing too many.

I didn't expect to like a 'dialogue only' story so much! I'm a little sad it's a oneshot, but it was really good!

AHHHHHH I love it!

Nice! I liked the use of only dialogue. I could definitely imagine what was happening even with out descriptions. Maddie's reactions to everything was great. I totally get her not believing Danny about Vlad and the ghost powers without proof; it is really unbelievable. But I'm happy she seemed to believe and trust him after Danny lit up his hands with ectoenergy. I hope that continues after he tells her about him being Phantom.

Well Maddie's world got turned upside down, it's ironic that Vlad hurting Valerie is going to come back to haunt him.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Ooooooh Amazing, BUT I NEEEED MOREIt was good from start till the end but it would also be a greaaaaat start for a two or three shot !