I...God dang it. Now I'm fuckin crying. You did good. Just take my compliment and go away while I cry in a corner.

...you almost made me cry for a dying old X-com super soldier. I thought the xcom games broke me of this. Damn it. I think I'm gonna cry when he dies.

Plz continue it's a great story, take your time but plz do continue with this

I'm loving this. Are you still writing it?

U stuck on something?

Hey, you still working on this thing, i'm starting to get worried...

Hello from swiss.

I think this part was alright. Much needed growth of the andromedons and what they had done without knowing it.
The only part i do t like is that gamma just took him in. Like : you was enemy, you say your good now, lets fight evil togheter. In my opinion its too fast. But still awesome story. I even draw some comicbookcover ish drawing for it. Maybe i post it on my DA account. Just dm/pm me if im allowed to do it

Have a awesome day all of you guys
ExtremeLucario

honestly... kind of surprised something like this hasn't been done before, unless it has and i just haven't found it. either way good story so far and i await the next installment.

I must admit that at first I had little expectations for this story but after reading on I realize how wrong I was, it is a very entertaining story.

I'm well aware that Gamma was inspired by Batman to become a vigilante, but for some reason every time I read the action sequences, it feels more like a Batman parody, which sometimes makes me want to laugh, no offense.

I keep waiting for the Chimera Squad to get in the way of Gamma / Frostbyte in the fight against crime in city-31, especially when Torque meets Gamma, I must admit that they would make a good couple.

I don't want to imagine once that Gamma is revealed to be the only male Viper, this would really cause a scandal in societies, especially Viper and XCOM society, as it gives me two assumptions:

1) XCOM will send a team to hunt him down and take him away for interrogation or in the worst case, dissect him to find out what's inside him.
and
2) Viper society will also start hunting it because they know that it is the only hope they have for their species to reproduce without depending on cloning.

P.S: I hope you continue it, you have something with potential.

So are is thete gonna be a mission where Chimera come across Doctor Valhan Subject Gamma, the only if not last Male Viper species. Also what will happen when word goes around that a Male Viper is found and doing vigilante stuff, probably Xcom wanna capture and interrogate or worst all female vipers want him badly.

I think finding a way to increase the durability of the envirosuit's glass should be a priority as a breach of any kind means death. Also try to get him one of those guns made for his kind as it was powerful and launched acid.

Well so far you are doing amazing but I wonder if you are going to try forming a “justice league” or something similar to that

Really like the way Gamma and Hubble met each other.
Now I'm eager to see how Gamma and Torque are going to meet.

another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

F in the chat.
Another well thought-out and executed chapter. Can't wait to see more of this interesting duo.