| Reviews for Mechanical Game |
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Thatz mann chapter 5 . 7/16 No!No!justNo!oh god please No Romance!NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! ... I'm serious N O FUCKIN keep that shit oc/oc if you want that shit goddamn it. |
merendinoemiliano chapter 8 . 7/16 Quite cool chapter |
Tyber Cat chapter 1 . 7/15 I'm dying right now. I've just been going around trying out new fics for a bit, but I've had the song renegade stuck in my dead all day and then I come across this fic. Concidence I think not. |
Silver0117 chapter 7 . 7/2 Nice story, you have my follow. |
merendinoemiliano chapter 7 . 7/1 Lovely chapter, trough I hope things will progress a little faster. |
Guest chapter 6 . 6/25 Just going to sleep without even tying them up? That sounds safe. |
netapel chapter 6 . 6/25 I like how this is a gamer fic but you keep it mostly realistic. yes there are drops but there isn't a status screen with exp and levels. it doesn't seem to be magical YET. and the next dungeon. The Jungle Ruins sound like they will have a Beringal with either plant, lightning, water or earth powers. plant and water because a jungle is a rainforest. earth because its a ruin. lightning because tropical storms have strong wind and powerful lightning and rain. the Beringal because its a gorilla. or you could make a king Beringal who is stronger and controls Chimpanze or Lemur Grimm. like some king of Ape/Monkey Kingdom built in the ruins of an anciant (most likely aztec or mayan looking) temple. |
merendinoemiliano chapter 6 . 6/15 Lovely |
blackredray21 chapter 5 . 5/24 Vibration puss penny and i think is a thing warning to make him and penny electroproof and magnectproof |
merendinoemiliano chapter 5 . 5/24 Interesting introspection and dialogues. So still a form of energy for them, it works for me. |
Swoogan chapter 4 . 5/18 What!? Grimm actually have some strength besides numbers in this universe, that great as im sick of reading about creatures that only really count as canon fauter. |
merendinoemiliano chapter 4 . 5/18 Pretty nice job overall. Regarding Grimm, I think they have a form of Aura (which frequencies can't be read by normal devices) and are in truth corrupted mystical animals, but let's see what Canon has in store.. Good work. |
merendinoemiliano chapter 3 . 5/8 Very good introspection |
merendinoemiliano chapter 1 . 5/1 Curious to see next events |
merendinoemiliano chapter 2 . 5/1 Interesting story |