| Reviews for Dog Day Afternoon |
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   MsNYC chapter 1 . 6/4 This was really cute! |
| Shandyshipper88 chapter 1 . 4/29 Mksc77 suggested I read this story, and like I always do, I read reviews first. Guest, either grow a pair and stop using being anonymous to be nasty, or shut up. MkSC77’s stories have more added realistic, “this is what real life is like” details than most stories I’ve read. Criticizing someone else’s story in the reviews is so pathetic that I could cry for you. Shower sex is not uncommon, and it’s not restricted to people under 60. Maybe the fact that you don’t seem to know that is why you’re so bitter—go get you some and stop being a nasty bitch. I really enjoyed this story. Fluffy one-shots are my favorite, and an entire story centered around something as small as a hot day is right up my alley. I apologize for the rant, but nasty anons discouraging people from writing piss me off. Thank you for writing this! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/28 Really liked this story. I could feel the heat of the day and the feelings of cranky from the heat. Thanks for sharing your story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27 I read this right after reading a story where they stupidly have sex in the shower and wind up in the hospital, so I laughed at Sharon rejecting that idea with "and what, break a hip?" This is more realistic. Andy's meltdown when Sharon laughed at him was very nicely written. I like all the events of this story, and the implication that this is far from the only time they've taken their bad moods out on each other. That's marriage, but this particular marriage in fanfic is often ridiculously sweet and tidy. |
| murphycat chapter 1 . 4/26 Very cute |
| welshcwtch chapter 1 . 4/26 That was sweet. |
| mallinks08 chapter 1 . 4/26 This put a huge smile on my face! "Aren't we a pair, huh?" "The best!" I just love this exchange! Thank you for this lovely story, and I hope you have more in the works because my thirst for your writing is unending! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25 Love cranky Sharon. Great story. Please write more |
| MkSC77 chapter 1 . 4/25 Cranky Sharon is my favorite! I love it when stories show that they argue sometimes and aren’t lovey-dovey 100% of the time. Thank you for this! |
| Rachel J chapter 1 . 4/25 Very nice one shot but you could add chapters to this story. It's good. Keep writing! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25 Great story. Was fun to read. More please. |
