Reviews for A Debt Unpaid
Rak Ewo chapter 7 . 7/25
Brilliant fanfic. do continue
plums chapter 7 . 7/24
So... Naruto landed a blind-kyubified shot on Obito right at the start when he freaked out... and what? It gave him a damned paper cut? No mention at all at what a berserk Jinchuriki did to a completely unaware Obito.

Then, Naruto hit him AGAIN... and what? Nothing? No long term impact on the fight. Not the injuries, or chakra poisoning from exposure to the Kyubi's charkra.

Making Obito invincible even when Naruto beat his transparency twice is really annoying. Hell, even Hatake managed to land solid hits/attacks on him and then RESTRAINED him... only for you to decide to let him go anyways.

So what was the point of all this? Is Hatake going to finally start kicking ass, taking names, and assassinate the literal 1/3 of the village that's f'd with Naruto?
mariclerson chapter 6 . 6/16
Such an amazing story! I love every bit of it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up with the good work!
Guest chapter 6 . 5/29
Oh my goodness! This is a seriously AMAZING story! Thank you for writing it. I can't wait to see what happens next.
plums chapter 6 . 5/29
well... story over!

seriously? there's just too many coincidences and inserting Naruto into every single past event that occurred prior to the start of canon.
laurajustin chapter 6 . 5/29
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
Don Thomas chapter 6 . 5/29
This chapter was quite interesting. The idea of Naruto, maybe even Kakashi, interfering with the Uchiha massacre is quite good. I wonder how the effects will turn out. How many of the Uchiha will the pair of them be able to save?

Is this story going to contain the standard cannon love interests? Or will Naruto end up with the Uchiha girl that he was able to save?
DOG666 chapter 5 . 5/26
There will be next chapter?
TheGod365 chapter 5 . 5/23
Amazing story keep up the hard work
deniswanheda chapter 5 . 5/18
Geniaaal

Será un naruhina, me gusta
laurajustin chapter 5 . 5/18
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
HardlyFlaccid chapter 4 . 5/14
Just found this story, and I love your writing! Can’t wait for more
Fee-fi-fo-fum chapter 4 . 5/8
So, Naruto may end up being a Kenjutsu prodigy? Is that anything to do with him being a member of the Uzumaki clan as it ends up being in various fanfics? Will he get Sakumo's white light chakra sabre?
Don Thomas chapter 4 . 5/8
Your story is fantastic!

Hoping Kakashi doesn't stay single forever and gets involved with a wonderful woman. Maybe Anko or Hana as both have an energetic or serious personality that would compliment him and his son. If he does end up with either one of them it would be interesting to see how the new family dynamic evolves and if you add in any potential additional children (siblings for Naruto) it would be fun to see how family interactions unfold.

Beyond that the development of him potentially becoming Hokage is nice. He is the logical choice and it would have been a wise move to have Hiruzen start grooming a successor to prevent Danzo from getting power.
Fee-fi-fo-fum chapter 1 . 5/8
I always love stories where Kakashi either raises Naruto or trains and treats him like Minato's son. A good story so far, I am interested in seeing where you take it from here.
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