Reviews for The Abandoned Storm Bender
kotlc pj dam fan chapter 5 . 7/16
CAN U PLS UPDATE IM DYING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT LIKE DYING!
tipsyseen chapter 5 . 7/12
keep the updates rolling champ
Guest chapter 5 . 6/30
Please update, this story is amazing! I can’t wait to see who wins in the fight. :D
Guest chapter 5 . 6/29
hey i was just wondering what your plan is with this story, like r u gonna do a timelapse yo eith the aang and co, or is this story gonna be befpre the star of avatar
weberma2020 chapter 5 . 6/27
This is really good I hope that Percy will meet his siblings again soon I think it would be very interesting
Rayna chapter 5 . 6/22
AHHHHHH THERE SHE ISSSSSSS
Rayna chapter 4 . 6/22
~Me scrolling through the chapters desperately trying to find Toph~
HellRaiderS chapter 5 . 6/21
Keep up the good work
Ranger Wheatley chapter 5 . 6/20
Nooo! I'm kidding. Almost everyone on this site uses at least 1 cliffhanger in their story. But still, the story is amazing. Please update soon!
Ranger Wheatley chapter 4 . 6/20
So for this story it's Perchel? Cool. I've never seen that ship before. Please update soon!
LuisAU chapter 5 . 6/18
Toph whines a little to much but other than that great chapter
Death Fury chapter 5 . 6/18
excellent chapter
the guy that loves all gunpla chapter 5 . 6/18
I feel like toph was a bit too whiney lol. like bruh, they're just trying to help you- stop jumping to conclusioooons- but great chapter still tho!
namer1 chapter 5 . 6/18
While Toph sounded as tough as in the show, it also sounded like she was a bit of a whiner. Maybe try and make it less like she is throwing a tantrum.

Sorry if I was a bit rude. Only trying to give supportive criticism
HellRaiderS chapter 4 . 6/10
A good plot with loads of potential please keep updating
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