FINALLY! I was looking forward to an update! I'm glad it's finally here. This was great! I'm glad the others are finally in on the loop. The time travel explanation was amazing too. I don't think I had understood CLs concept of time travel as accurately as before this explanation so great job. It definitely is creepy to imagine that in the alternative time line that's left behind, the Lyoko Warriors actually died of some of the injuries they sustained on the show and the ones that are still alive are just their past selves with data of some future events added.

Professor Hopper has mellowed I see with his amusement regarding the kids and do I see a hint of Jim possibly being invited to join the Lyoko squad for good this time?
Can't wait for the next update as usual! This story is going great and I'm having a lot of fun reading it so great job!

The way you've got the teaser at the beginning of the chapter with subsequent hour markers after that was brilliant! The character's reactions to Lyoko was great, as well, and I didn't see any of the missed words and/or grammar issues that some of the other chapters had. Yumi's musing at the end was part funny, part frightening, and entirely on point!

Overall, nice work on this one!

I liked this chapter. You struck a nice balance in the way you portray Jeremy being understandably upset. Your grasp of subtlety in people's emotions is quite commendable.

Also, I'd like to reiterate that I really like the personality you've given Franz Hopper. The decision to make him slightly Puckish is great!

This is good,I need help on my code lyoko story

This story is so good and unique! I love the characterization! Normally i would have expected Franz to be weary but I like that you made him recognize that Jeremy is almost exactly like him and it took Aelita longer to trust him. Their growing relationship is everything! So fluffy and cute! I love the moments with the rest of the Lyoko Warriors but I'm glad you're taking your time introducing them cuz it gives Jeremid and Aelita and the overall story a better foundation. Please don't abandon this story! I can't wait for more updates!

This is a very nice story. Just read up to this chapter. I really like the way you went with it all.

This chapter seemed to be mostly shameless fluff... nothing wrong with shameless fluff... nothing at all. :P

This was fantastic. While there are a number of grammar mistakes and missed words, you do something very right that most authors here can't seem to manage: pacing. You let the quiet moments be quiet and linger, but your exciting moments are intense and fun!

I really like the moments with Franz Hopper. We never get to see much of his personality in the show, but I could definitely see him being like this. Overall, nice work.

By the way, I was the guest reviewer on chapter three... there was a little bit of glitchiness that caused that... sorry.

This one was a lot of fun and the Jerlita moment at the end was a nice icing on the cake!

This was great. Candid Franz-Jeremy talks are a bit of a rarity, but I really appreciated you making him a sort of mentor figure to Jeremy. Nice work.

It's certainly reasonable for Aelita to be mistrustful of Jeremy! That being said, Aelita was outspoken enough in he show for her willingness to express that to be quite realistic. I'm glad that you didn't go overboard though, it seemed like you hit a nice balance.

Again, this is pretty cool. I think it's kinda interesting that Aelita convinced Odd and Yumi that the attack was a dream. That being said, what happens when they talk to each other...?

Reading this was a lot of fun. The new dynamic of having Franz and Aelita present made the episode different enough to not feel like a stale rehash, instead it was more like a well loved old car with an exciting new 'makeover.'

Little known fun fact though: shoulder wounds are actually far more dangerous than movies and tv suggest. There's a very large vein and artery that is right in the shoulder. Also, if a bullet (or nut/bolt in this case) hits the collar bone or another one bone nearby, it has a high chance of fragmenting it sending chunks and shards into the lung, either that large vein or artery feeding the arm, or possibly even the jugular vein if it's close enough to the neck. That doesn't detract from the story, but I thought you'd be interested in knowing.

It's amazing how much the dynamic of having Franz and Aelita keeps this from feeling like a stale rehash. It was quite enjoyable and I look forward to more from you. Btw, thanks for the shoutout!

And the little Jerlita moment was cute.

Sorry, dude. That chapter has had a bad update. It's hard to read for the source code hindering the reading.