Reviews for The Unexpected Reward |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() They finally said the magic words! I’m glad they finally realize the full extent of their feelings—particularly Natsu. And the ending was great. Can’t wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() So romantic. Not just the intimate stuff, but his belief in and support of her. I just love the way he treats her like she's the most awesome person ever. So sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter! though, still feeling totally cock blocked |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing makes me happier than seeing a pissed off Natsu when it comes to babies |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Its great seeing their relationship slowly move forward. Looking forward to next time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter! I was not expecting that plot twist at all. Can’t wait for the next update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! Didn't see that one coming! Gary's slimy biological father was the one stealing from their client and even threatened sweet little Amelia! What a scumbag! I hope he doesn't cause more trouble... Love the passionate moment between Natsu and Lucy! Keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wasn't expecting to see Haru's sperm donor ever again. I thought he'd be left to oblivion as nothing more than just a throwaway character that was around to help facilitate the initial plot. I'm glad Natsu torched him. He's clearly got no scruples and would've continued to do awful things. Well, they survived their first job away from their baby boy. Good for them. Maybe they'll be able to find little day jobs around Magnolia so they won't have to leave town too often until Haru is a little older. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHH IT'S BACK! A beautiful chapter, I love it! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again, leave it to Cana! This chapter was great. Also, I didn’t think you were making them be mean to her, it was clear they just took it too far. I’m glad they finally kissed. Can’t wait for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I’ll have to fight Happy, he always knows how to ruin a moment! Lol. Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how responsible Natsu is, and I think what he did for the family is so cute! I hope Lucy cusses the land lady out on the way out... that was so trash. Also, the fluff and flirting this chapter was great. Can’t wait to see how their relationship keeps unfolding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Leave it to Cana! And I think you’re developing the story and their personalities nicely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was so sweet! And what a cute name 3 |