When one is bored, and one realizes that the first reviews they didn’t weren’t NEARLY good enough, and one also realizes they can sign out, and leave as many guest reviews as they want- Then one can be happy XD
Okayyy! I don’t think I was very descriptive when first reviewing this chapter, so let’s beee descriptive!
Favorite quotes!
"Would you mind bringing up some caf for us?"
"Personally, no. Medically, yes."
Well, he had asked. "It's that or a stim shot."
Kix hurried out.”
Kix, you are magnificent XD
Also, when Ponds says this, “Hostage?" Ponds frowned. "They're taking this more seriously than I expected." Is so beautiful.
This is where the crazy really starts boys!
-and girls XD
Also yes, Mace Windu! “As of now, Skywalker, we are at war."
I legitimately DIED reading this!
Now y’all know how sleeplessness feels!
So good. This remains one of my VERY favorite chapters ever!
-Kara

Have I reviewed this chapter yet?
I don’t think so...
So yes!
Anakin totally cracks me up. His, “Wait, I don’t think I like Medics.” Is priceless.
Yes Anakin. You don’t :)
Also, COMMANDER SNIPS. Yes please :D change your title Ahsoka, you are now Commander Snips :)
Also, “We’re do we keep the MEDICS!?” “In storage.”
First time I read that, I laughed so hard I ACTUALLY couldn’t breathe. So thanks :D
-Kara

Okay, so I forgot to say my VERY favorite part in this chapter, so I had to sign out and leave a guest review :)
Oh yeah, back to reviewing!
The part where Obi-Wan thinks it’s against the Jedi code to breathe made me laugh so hard that I could no longer breathe. (Talk about cruel irony!)
*shakes finger in warning*
If you don’t stop writing funny things so well, you’re going to be charged of murdering someone with laughter!
*sighs*
So yes, I’m now dead. And also not very patient... So update soon?
Cuz if not, you might, maybe, possibly have a dead, extremely bored person hunting you down and forcing you to write :D
That being said, good day!
-Kara

Plo Koon, no! Obi-Wan doesn't need help. XD
I think here is there. XP
Obi-Wan is really holding his breath? XD Oh, dear, this us going to go grandly!
Obi-Wan is just so... so crazy!
Actually, telling Obi-Wan he will complete the mission by talking with Stitch is brilliant.
Cofy just wants to sedate everyone. XD
Stitch is the only one who dares get that close to a loopy Jedi with a LIGHTSABER.
Cody threatening Rex with a promotion. XD Doesnt that mean he couldnt serve under Anakin, or am I getting things mixed up again?
Cody is so done with everyone now. Nobody will mess with him for now!
This was brilliant! XD

FOX! FOX! FOX! FOX! COMM-AN-DER FOX! COMM-AN-DER FOX! Oh, this is going to be RICH! Okay, this was hilarious! Obi-Wan sounds very much like...Gandalf...I love his lengthy babbling! Oh...poor Cody...but for once, I actually will laugh at his predicament - and I will take an example from Commander Wolffe and NOT feel sorry for him. ;) Commander Wolffe...very sympathetic, but like sandpaper on the outside...oh...wouldn't it be funny (if you end up continuing this little...escapade) if Obi-Wan starts saying what he thinks of the clones?

"Master," Ahsoka gritted through her teeth, "you might want to...stop...now? Please?"
But Obi-Wan continued to prattle away, blissfully ignorant of Ahsoka's warning - Anakin wasn't even TRYING to stop him.

"Yes, quite so!" Obi-Wan beamed a smile to all in the medbay. "Commander Wolffe does seem to enjoy playing the grouchy old fogey, but he's quite a pleasant chap, really. Personally, I'd like to see how he fares in a bout of verbal sparring with our old friend, Count Dooku. I say, pretty good, what?"

Anakin left his former master in the capable hands of Stitch, left Ahsoka to deal with Obi-Wan on her own, left the med-bay, and joined Rex, Wolffe, and Commander Cody in pounding out a rhythmic beat on the wall with his head.

Oh, I feel so bad for everyone who has to deal with Obi-Wan XD
Why did Cody threaten Rex with promotion? Does Rex not want to be promoted?

Oh yes!
I’m totally imagining Obi-Wan’s, “are we there yet?” In a super whiny voice :’)
Also the whole bunch of beautiful Kriff about where when how what stuff with Plo being ‘wise’ cracked me up!
“Maybe it’s all three.” :)
Is there any particular reason why Obi-Wan is always mixing Anakin and Cody up?
Also I totally love Stitch. One of my friends has a 212th head medic named Stitch too :)
By far one of my favorite chapters!
-Kara

Yes I want to know what happens when they get to the ship. This is awesome

Poor Cody and Wolffe…
Whatever you want to write next is fine with me :)

Totally! Boy, do I want a follow-up! As usual, you did all the characters fabulously! Plo Koon is being unhelpful and calculatingly immature - Wolffe isn't doing too much to hide his own opinion of General Kenobi's behavior whilst said Jedi is in his predicament (well, Wolffe IS rather obvious when it comes to his 'tolerance level'...) and Cody is sorely tempted to follow Wolffe's example of an openly displayed BAD attitude. So funny!

"I'm constructing a Snow Plo!" Okay - yeah - that was great! I definitely want a follow-up. :) Poor Cody. I like how the writing flows in this one - you didn't switch POV, and for this one it worked REALLY well! You're able to get nicely into Cody's "mindset" and it makes it all the funnier when reading his mental commentary - especially the part when he actually SAYS what he had thought - after replacing his helmet of course.

Can Cody go back to the cruiser and down half a pot of caf? Perhaps a medic, doing his usual post-mission check-ups on the boys, could frown down upon Cody's strange behavior - but of course, it's caf - or banging your head against a wall... ;)

I still would like to read an Obi-Wan Kenobi vs. Dooku (negotiating and all that) whilst having a tea party. I wonder...if you do a follow-up, would Obi-Wan walk around the ship spouting opinions all over the ship? The thought is making me laugh...(I can just see the other shinies and whoever else is on board staring at him) especially if Obi-Wan, after completely overwhelming one of the more timid shinies, decides to adopt said clone...AWW! :D

I loved it, couldn't help but grin like an idiot while reading it. Seeing Obi wan behave like a high idiot instead of Anakin is the best thing ever and I don't think Anakin would ever let him live that down. Also the jedi being bored and showing of their skills definetely happened at some point in canon :D

Yes! We NEED a follow up on this!
My favorite part, Obi-Wan’s ‘meditation’ cracks me up every time! Thanks so much for this!
-Kara

Lovely. I could tell you had fun with this. Yes the gunship please.

Chapter 3:
And yet another chapter that made me laugh through the entire thing :))) I loved how you mentioned Kit Fisto’s signature smile because every time I point it out to my family, they have no idea what I’m talking about! So this is a nice confirmation that it exists. This chapter was far from a let down in terms of detail and technicalities. You have a certain eye for detail that brings your stories alive that many authors here don’t have. One thing. Near the beginning somewhere I noticed a double spacing that shouldn’t have been there. But other than that, flawless.

ErinKenobi

Chapter 2:
Hahahahaha! This chapter was hilarious! Please keep up writing more. All that over a box of caf? Genius. So creative. And with such a not so serious topic you still managed to keep your writing neat and finished. I love that you turned a simple box of caf into a high class tactical battle. Your writing really brought the story to life with your detailed descriptions and use of metaphors. I’m so excited to read the next one!

ErinKenobi