Been more than a week, ya know...

Well ... It's definitely different.

Very cool. A Naruto that's a real shinobi and all that entails. For better or worse killing your enemies does make for a higher rate of survival especially in the elemental nations. Qrow is just not on the same level, probably put up a fight and maybe escape.

Can you fix your flashbacks? Like put them in italics. Because your flashback threw me for a loop

this was a more emotional chapter for the cast but I feel like you got most of them down pat. Ever since Oum Monty died it's been hard to get a good read on the series but I feel that Ozpin should be more pragmatic after seeing,(well living) history bring the world to it's current state. Namely he should've known Naruto is a paradox. PS I'm working again so there's a chance I may not respond as often.

loved the chap..

Qrow being Ruby's dad was not subliminal btw it was pretty blatent lol

regardless I still heavily enjoyed the content

Ozpin and the others assumed the worst of naruto. Did they even research the accident like asking the shop owners about beening attacked and Naruto protecting them

I still feel that Glynda let her belief that Naruto was a “threat” cause her to act prematurely in trying to use LETHAL FORCE on Naruto! Her injuries are her own fault!

If Naruto can put both Glynda and Tai in that state whilst simultaneously killing a bunch of mooks along with Torchwick then Qrow ain't got a chance in hell.

Naruto didn't even seem to have broken a sweat during the ass whooping he gave out so they better move cautiously or I doubt this ROOT trained version of Naruto will be so lenient next time.

The way you portray Ozpin seems off, you'd think he'd be more eloquently spoken and calm but he appears to be a stuttering and bumbling fool in your story.

Is this a Daddy Crow story? If so then I am even more interested. Do wish there was more Naruto. Also I support Naruto and Neo in a hate love ship

When you put the dialog of two characters within the same sentence or line it is really confusing to read. Also, both Tai and Ozpin's dialog were choppy and didn't flow.

It is a shame that you killed Roman so early.

Interesting. Looking forward to the meeting between Naruto and Qrow. It'll be interesting to see how this event will affect Ruby and Yang going forward to Beacon.

So I’ve been reading this and I’ve got to admit your Chakra system makes no sense what so ever with how it’s known to work.

You’ve made it seem like Naruto doesn’t produce much Chakra on his own but that’s completely opposite of how he is. Or any ninja for that matter. Their bodies naturally produce chakra, the chakra you talk about from the environment is nature chakra and it’s something very few people in all of the Ninja nations can draw on let alone use because of how dangerous it is to the user without proper training.

Also, what happened to the Kyuubi? On top of his already insane reserves and his bodies chakra generation, the Kyuubi has his own Chakra constantly going into his Chakra system giving him an even greater boost. Given what we know I honestly don’t see how Naruto is having any issue with his chakra regeneration cause it’s a natural part of his biology.

Other than that this is a good story and this isn’t meant as a flame just something that doesn’t make any sense with what is known about Naruto and Chakra in its various forms.