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Kat chapter 10 . 7/2 Interesting i wonder how she got turned back to pre mage and how will she return to her mage self. It was nice how protective the bard was n love how geralt knew her rt away. More please |
Updown1234 chapter 10 . 6/29 Thank you for the chapter! LOL it cracks me up that Jaskier called Triss sapphic in a song and paired her with Yen without knowing who he was singing the song to. Also his total lack of a filter about Yennefer is coming to bite him back in the butt. I feel really bad for Yen at this moment, but I look forward to seeing more Geralt and Yen interactions soon. The twist with Triss and Gerlat trading destiny duties was really interesting, but that also means we'll hopefully see Ciri in this fic too! |
Updown1234 chapter 9 . 6/22 I'm laughing really hard at the misunderstanding that comes from Jaskier completely believing this is a different Yen and Geralt calling Yen by that shortened nickname. It'll probably get resolved really quickly from Geralt explaining in the next chapter and I look forward to seeing what Jaskier's reaction to finding out Yen and other Yen are the same person. Also wow Roach is like a puppy who will follow anyone who has food and cuddles. Apparently all Roachs are and that is a nice hilarious touch of backstory to end the chapter with. Thank you for the chapter! |
Updown1234 chapter 8 . 6/15 I thought the joke with the lamprey was hilarious, as was Yenna's reaction to it. I'm a little confused on what time this story takes place. It is definitely a bit after the Battle of Sodden Hill, since Jaskier mentions getting the story from the survivors, but in the previous chapter, Yenna and Jaskier see a person wearing a string of ears that sounds like Adon, who dies before then. I'm curious if your other fic takes place in between the dragon one and this one to explain how they made up because Jaskier doesn't seem all that mad at him, even with the fact that he's trying to cheer Yenna up added to that. Also, I'm still debating on how much of Jaskier's "plan" to get more stories out of Geralt with Yenna is tinted by the feeling that he doesn't really think Yenna's home life is great and wants to keep her around. I guess we'll find out! Thank you for the chapter! |
Stoner63reflex chapter 7 . 6/13 Farla can I throat fuck you so you'll shut up? Please I think you'll enjoy it, perhaps that's why your so mad because no one wants to touch you... |
Updown1234 chapter 7 . 6/7 Oh my gosh what is happening in this chapter. It's highly interesting to see this from Yenna's pov (or what I'm assuming is her pov) but this was honestly a really unsettling chapter. Especially with that starting line? Wow, I really like it though. Thanks for the chapter! |
Updown1234 chapter 6 . 6/1 The part about Jaskier fumbling around trying to play with the doll and Yenna is hilarious, in a sad sort of way. I love reading their interactions and how out of depth Jaskier is with this whole situation. Now I'm really really really curious as to what happened to Yennefer to make her like this (de-aging? Time reversal?), and I can't wait to see how it all plays out and if she keeps her memory of this time when she reverts back. (Or if she ever does revert back) Thank you for the chapter! |
Updown1234 chapter 5 . 5/29 Super interesting so far! I was a little weirded out from the comments but I then remembered the whole pokemon thing that happened some time ago after seeing you were the writer and wow it has been a long time. I can't believe he is still leaving comments... but on to the actual fic. I'm really glad you got into The Witcher because your content is always a pleasure to read and not a rehash of the usual tropes. I think the way you write as Jaskier also flows very smoothly and sounds just like him. I have no clue what's going on so far but I'm excited to see where this is going to go. I wonder what will happen if Geralt shows up... can't wait! |
HA chapter 4 . 5/11 Do you go ass to mouth? Something tells me you do :) |
Z chapter 1 . 5/10 So quick question...for you and your butt buddy St. Elmo's Fire trash...how do you guys sleep every night and look into a mirror knowing you've bullied and discouraged young teens from having fun and being creative in their own ways? Do you understand the meaning of the word 'empathy'? I doubt it. Try incorporating it in one of your pretentious stories. You both are a bunch of sociopaths and should've been aborted. I hate saying this about anyone because it's not in my nature to do so, but you both are absolutely pathetic scums of the earth. I sense you two pat yourselves on the back and possibly engage in a circle jerk when you've upset and hurt these people who have done nothing wrong, essentially. Sociopaths. Sick degenerates who were born and raised in the dregs of society, I imagine. Get fucked. |
OldSchoolJohto chapter 2 . 5/8 [Besides, she's even scared of his lute, she'd probably refused to go out with her family any time there was bard playing and just stayed in the house.] Amazing. [Which, well, he's pretty good at holding an entire conversation himself, if he must,] TRUE THAT. [I was in the barn," she says, looking down so her floorboard audience can hear her better. "My father's barn. At home. I was there and - and then I was in woods. I thought I. That I hadn't remembered going." ... There was a huge fight with a lot of mages and a lot of magic here. All that chaos being thrown around, it could've done all sorts of things. Just bad luck on your part, getting dragged into it, I'm sure.] Aha, now we’re starting to see what happened... And this kinda suggests that Jaskier knows as little about mages as Yen does about Witchers. [He supposes that's an accurate statement if you consider that weeks do contain days.] LOL. He’s a fun perspective character. [Sorry, it's only I know another Yennefer. A much worse one," ... assuming Yennefer herself is not actually Lilit incarnated to fuck with people.] Hahaha [bunch of evil girls all getting born at once that the sorcerers saved everyone from?] Oof, a sadly on-brand take for Jaskier. Even unpacking the tales about the elves, he has to trust in stories. It’s what he is. This is a LONG paragraph though. [Really, the hardest bit will be trying to get a fresh spin on the well-known fact that sometimes people who are born beautiful are really the ugliest underneath and to be truthful,] Zing! [my least sensible friend] Simultaneously very true and very untrue. [Like we don't all know the real reason he's fucking her] Ooh yeah Jaskier is very good with kids. Might be nice to see him belatedly try to self-correct. [He spares a moment to be irritated about how it'd be a lot easier to defend Geralt if the guy wasn't unreasonably opposed to such conversational niceties as responding to questions people ask you. Next time he sees him Jaskier will point out that according to Better Yennefer, now people in Gulet think witchers are some sort of hellzombie - where had that even come from?] I love that he thinks Geralt would care or hasn’t heard that before. And off they go on what will surely be a fun adventure with no problems whatsoever. |
emotheextremo chapter 1 . 5/5 I have absolutely no clue what the witcher is, but this really interest me and is another one of your good writes. By the way it's shall I get you a drink not I'll get you a drink. |
fucku chapter 1 . 5/5 you remember me ... u pointed t my spelling mistakes in a chapter... i felt so bad... thats why i fucked your mother... hahahha |
OldSchoolJohto chapter 1 . 4/21 Just here to boost your stats. The narration style rings very true for Jaskier. I love how they’re each misunderstanding each other over the lute. |