Super great so far! Can’t wait to see how stargate really ties in with the story.

You need a (new) beta. you have a shit ton of misspelled words, all who now mean something entirety else (takes extra seconds to minutes to decode) and you and in the start at terrible habit of using the same work 2,3,9 times in a row. You definitely need help with comma and redundancy, it's heartache inducing. and just advice on how to make things a little less cliche, a little less angsty and a little less dramatic. it's drama drama drama drama! and the hate is terrible. why are people so full of hate in this world? will we ever know? it's not normal that so many people can get away with such unlawful cruelty. so why can they? It's hard to imagine that Dumbledore truely has this much power. and why make the chosen one such a humbleless creature who hates and bullies? why would Dumbledore let this happen and so publicly? why is he so obviously a racist here and no one questions it? is it a world wide spell? charm? Jinx? teh opposite of the ancient seer curse?

It would be nice if you put in sgc chapter for the next one the meeting between the flagship team of sg1 and the commanding officer and harry's first space battle cruiser against Anubis.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Very interesting idea granted it seems to be made namely for crack plots but still good.

great crossover cant wait for the update

:-)

*laughs out loud and _ALMOST_ falls out of his computer chair to roll on the floor*
That was HILARIOUS!

Well done! MORE! MORE! ENCORE! ENCORE!

Oh-ho-ho-ho man.. I LOVE IT!

Thank you!

Now this one was simply adorable

Disney? Saban! Frenchies and Toei. After all... Marina is really cute!

great chpt short but good

c00l

Like it

nice chapter thx for writing it
lol with lucius :D