| Reviews for To Become A God |
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FinalKingdomHearts chapter 1 . 5/23 Interesting, I look forward to the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16 Since you said Harry would be a gamer, I expected him to be an epic Fortnite gamer who rose up after being oppressed by society and Chad, but there wasn't even a Joker cameo. 69/420, bottom text. (But seriously, this not being a meme fanfiction makes me sad.) |
DesertSandBox chapter 1 . 4/24 hey so if the blood wards strength is dependent on the love petunia feels for harry does that mean they will be stronger now and also with him learning to protect his mind will that effect the piece of voldemort in his scar? i love this story and hope you keep up the good work |
Keyblademaster 21177 chapter 1 . 4/22 Firstly: love the story, all the other harry potter gamer fics always turn harry evil or they always start during his fourth year at hogwarts or something like that so thanks for doing it like this. Starting at his childhood and not making him evil so thanks again. Secondly: could you do timeskips until he gets his acception letter to hogwarts when he's eleven. We don't want to have to read like 20 chapters of harry going on a million adventures in the magical world until you finally get to canon. Skip all the way to him getting his acception letter and give a brief summary of what happened over the years and how much he levelled up and how many new skills and spells he discovered. Just get to the main plot so harry can start messing with things with his gamer ability. Thirdly: can you make it a harem. Being a pervert i would want to see how harry would handle a harem. Also, lets be honest, what kind of guy would not try to get a harem if they had something great like the gamer ability. |
BurnedMiw chapter 1 . 4/22 Wow, waiting for next chapter |
Damobea chapter 1 . 4/21 I like it. I’ve read a lot of Game fics, but so far this is a good one. I would suggest bolding the Gamer Interface/Notifications. Make it more easily distinguished from the regular stuff. It also gives the impression of an actual prompt. |
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 1 . 4/21 Not Bad. Better Start Than Most Gamer Fics! |
Sparks18 chapter 1 . 4/21 I like the story. but I do hope that Harry and Aurelia don't go evil or very dark. looking forward to next update |
NarutoCloud chapter 1 . 4/21 Very interested in how your bring this story to fruition. I look forward to future chapters and how you develop the characters from here |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20 This is terrible, from the stupid question marks to the ridicules stats and of course the fucking OC that has no reason to be here. This is garbage. |
Tenjo chapter 1 . 4/20 As for the story, it seems well written. My only gripe is the same one I have with all gamer stories: the HP. Getting punched on the foot would take HP, so you’re saying he can die from too many foot punches? |
Tenjo chapter 1 . 4/20 I’m genuinely curious... why are there trends on this site? For the past week or so there’s been an over abundance of Hermione/Draco, Hermione/Severus, Harry/Draco and Harry/Severus stories... now there’s suddenly a bunch of gamer stories. There’s been reincarnation trends, Harry as a Slytherin lord trends, Harry as a borderline rapist trends, Harry/Tom trends... it’s weird. |
xandermartin98 chapter 1 . 4/20 So...is Harry going to become his Thirty H's incarnation at some point in this story? |