Reviews for Operation Mud and Blood
Guest chapter 23 . 9/22
I LOVED this story! Sorry for not leaving reviews for each chapter, but after doing that with a previous story I read (and it was longer by about ten chapters), I realized that it would take too long. So I'm leaving one at the very end. Again, I loved this story! It was so action packed and tense (plus the use of Spanish!), and I enjoyed every bit of it. Tracker, Chase, and Marshall were great picks for the main leads (especially Tracker because he deserves the love). To me, they were all well within character (in particular Marshall, who had some very humorous moments), and I'm glad that I took the time to read this tale. My only criticism is spelling and grammar (plus some very weird word placements at times). Other than those, I saw nothing wrong with how the story played out. However, I would like to point out that not that many people in Adventure Bay showed up (or were even mentioned), Mr. Porter being literally the only one. I'm wondering where some of them were during this whole ordeal (like Katie, Captain Turbot, and most importantly, Mayor Goodway). Also, where was Carlos? And lastly, what about Tuck and Ella? I can understand the omission of Rex (I don't think he even existed when this story started), but the twins definitely were, so where were they? Sorry, I'm just curious to understand your thoughts on these loose ends I'm perceiving. But anyway, I'll leave this review here. I hope to see more from you in time (especially if Tracker is in it), so keep up the good work!
DR. TONI chapter 23 . 8/22
I'm pretty much a simp for Nazi and WW2 stories

So I vote Nazi America
Adam chapter 24 . 8/16
I vote Nazi America, it sounds cool to read.
D chapter 23 . 8/15
I vote that there should be a sequel to Mud and Blood (This is D from Atlas' discord, 7-10, just posting my vote for the pole).
Skye rules chapter 23 . 8/15
Damn it finally u finished the fic
Deckard The DemonWolf of Hell chapter 23 . 8/15
A happy ending to all!
samuelsmwong chapter 23 . 8/14
That’s a great story
Shadow Fox 1000 chapter 23 . 8/14
Awesome story, I love everything about it.
Rescue Wolf chapter 23 . 8/14
It's quite a interesting ending but still maybe you should make a note to remind yourself what you told someone else like they will see thier Oc in the next chapter. But still it's nice to see that Chase got a new girl even though he still hadn't learned his lesson about what caused Skye to break up with him.
Deckard The DemonWolf of Hell chapter 22 . 8/13
The war has ended and they can finally head home.
Deckard The DemonWolf of Hell chapter 21 . 8/13
Damn! For a second I thought Chase might hand Tracker over to the Cartel.
Deckard The DemonWolf of Hell chapter 20 . 8/13
Great job on the chapter!
samuelsmwong chapter 22 . 8/9
It’s a really good chapter
Rescue Wolf chapter 22 . 8/8
It's quite interesting that he chose to die in the same spot where his mother was buried and It's nice to see that no one would have to commit crimes in order to get the hostages back from the cartel. But do wonder what's next for Chase since Skye isn't available to him anymore and Valkyrie already has a mate. Well anyways take your time in writing the final chapter to this interesting story.
Skye rules chapter 21 . 8/2
Crap! Please finish the story. A ser this question please. Will chase get another love interest?
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