Really appreciate the way you have both captured and framed the distance between Janeway and Chakotay in this chapter. Great job.

Just read the first 6 chapters of this story and its fantastic! You write so very well for Kathryn & Chakotay, and Im intrigued with the Xykartan's! Poor Chakotay though, he loves Kathryn so dearly, but can't seem to find the means to show her/convince her to give them a chance

A dark twist on the usual J/C dynamic with Chakotay being the one holding back for a change. I hope he doesn't stop trying to connect for too long! (Though maybe giving Janeway a bit of her own medicine will make her reach out first?)

Phew - Chakotay's got it bad! Angst abounds.

I really like the masculine language for Kathryn - 'jerked her chin', 'sucked in a lungful of air'. It suits her so well. And the descriptive passages in this chapter are beautiful.

Great story so far, I really enjoyed it, I hope you intend to continue it. I always thought there was more to their relationship.

Very interesting take on Starfleet and the Maquis, more importantly the parallels between the people that join their ranks. Another great chapter!

Amazing chapter!

Interesting plot and great writing. I'm hooked.

Omg! I am in love with this fanfic. I don’t know any other Star Trek fans, and it’s nice to know that there are other people who think Janeway and Chakotay would be an amazing couple.

You guys are amazing authors. Thank you for working hard to give us this incredible story. Love you guys.

-Annika (yes, I have the same first name as Seven.)

I just want to hug him.

Poor Chakotay. Well done as always. I can’t wait for the next installment!

Ugh. You are worth the wait. That was so good. Just agonizingly beautiful. I look forward to the next update

Alluring wormholes. Two words I might never have put together but now seem to blend so very well I can’t imagine them apart.
Well done. I like the storyline. Keep em coming.

That description of the coffee going cold was definitely a familiar experience for me! It bugs me that Kathryn's character in the TV show seems to be so emotionally intelligent when it comes to her crew, but unintelligent in her own personal relationships. I want her to wake up and smell the cheese! At least your version of Kathryn is actually aware that something's off, even if she doesn't know exactly what it is!

Ouch - I felt that blade coming for my own neck!