DAMNIT!
I'M OFFICIALLY SALTY!
Cu caster aside, since everyone gets a free copy of him for completing fuyuki, Ritsuka got Salter, Tamamo, Lantoria and Gareth?
Ok wait I'm to salty to think straight.

Ok, Gareth aside(since she is a bronze servant in fgo, no offense intended she is just easily available {relatively}) She got a 4* and two 5*s in one roll?
Just how high is her luck?!

Well setting aside these rants I enjoyed the chapter. I should probably not compare this to the real game this being a fanfiction and all.A bit of confusion though. How does Artoria Lancer knows Ritsuka? This is one point I don't get.

Anyways, I'm gonna stick around and read it all whatever you write, it's your story and I'm gonna read it through.

A bit of a selfish request though, when you move to the next singularity Orleans, can you get Sasaki Kojiro a.k.a. Regend to slay wyverns and say something along the lines of 'Wyvers are just bigger swallows...'
Please?

Again I enjoy your writing and am gonna read it all so keep it up, don't worry too much about anything and everything just keep writing constantly.

PEACE!

And once again, Olga dies... *sigh* why does it keep happening?

Ritsuka being able to trace noble phantasms doesn't be possible unless, she has a reality marble like UBW, which is near impossible.

Martha beating Hercules, especially in a fist fight makes no sense.

good chapter I like the story although I have a doubt the last arturia is that lancer arturia the normal one? or is it the lancer alter or the arturia alter rider? I have an idea but I don't know what it is?

Wonderful!

next chapter

Aw maaaaan, Ritsuka has already started her harem. First Mashu, now Tamamo. She merely needs to summon other class Tamamo's and she has a bonafide harem. Excluding Koyanskaya. She doesn't need her. Kuro, though, also may be good to summon.

More please

1. Just found this and I gotta say: More please :)
2. only Horse-Riding Lancer I can think of is Lancer-Artoria and her Alter-Self
3. How soon until she summons her Aunt Artoria?

I like myself although good olga always dies and good even with that personality I would like her to be saved but hey she is necessary for the lost belts

First of all thank you for the new chapter.

I don't know why, but I was crying when I read the part where EMIYA was being summoned(guess I'm too deep into fate).

Anyways I loved the way you wrote it and I'm gonna stick around to read it till the end, so please don't stop.

Thanks for a good read.

...Did you notice that you spelled Rin as Ron in the summary?

This is well written, you have a few grammar mistakes here and there, but for the most part you do a fine job. The story so far is interesting that Ritsuka has a connection to Tiamat I do wonder how that meeting is going to turn out. I hypothesis confusion, and moments that will make me laugh. Keep up the good work lol126, I await your next chapter.

A note on the side, if you haven't read Fragments of Chaldea, it is a good way to learn how to write many of the servants. Just some advice for when you start having multiple servants and need to figure out how they could react to certain situations.

This story, it is nice. It's not the first with many of its ideas (Ritsuka is child of Rin x Shirou, is young, summons EMIYA Archer as a reunion, fluff ensues) but it's not the 10th, so it's not overdone yet. Hopefully this version continues further and has more in it before it becomes forgotten. One I remember as purely a series of drabbles, another I don't know if it even finished 'F', another was a delightful series of less than 10 comics, and at least one of these had some 'Ishtar' shenanigans. I enjoyed them all, and I expect I'll enjoy this one.

Beyond the idea, the quality is at least acceptable. Using script format names instead of prose for establishing conversation is an amateur action, but at least it isn't terrible. Grammar is at least as good as a native writer should be, with no sentences forcing me to reread in order to understand. A correction: I remember there was a word that looked like a 9 got typo-ed instead of an 'o' in chapter 5, but I don't keep notes for that if I'm not beta-ing (pm me if you want a second set of eyes for grammar checks, though qualitative opinions aren't my forte). In all, this was a fun read enabled by an amateur that at least deserves some encouragement to keep trying.

I hope the next installment doesn't take too long, but with 6 in around 4-5 months (April to Aug) it's fast enough that I'm not worried.