Glad Thorin is starting to realize things. I hope Corran doesn't let him off the hook easily. He needs some sense be knocked ito him. Again, I'm in love with your story.

I have just found your story today and I really, really love it. I read it all in one sitting. I love Corran; she's hardworking, strong-willed & strong-minded. My heart broke for her when Thorin even refused to listen to her. I second what Dis about him the most titanic of fools. I like Corran's grandpa too. He's the kind of person who knows more than they tell. Again, I love the story very much and will be waiting for an update.

I think grandpa knows more than what he's letting on. He was once in love himself. Maybe something like this happened to him? Fill is starting to realize something is going on haha I feel like him and Kill are going to butt in where Thorin would not approve lol Side note, I wonder what's going to happen next chapter!

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cannot wait until next update!

I really hope Thorin later realizes looking at Corrin or remembering back on this, her hair is cut. Then he can panic because he wants to know who she her braid to. It would serve him right lol and Dis would know but wouldn't say who but hint that she did know who to leave Thorin stewing in his thoughts ha ha. On the side not, poor Corrin. Now she's going to feel a bit dead inside to block out the emotions.

I seriously love this story. The pace is on point. You help the characters come alive. I enjoy reading every chapter and look forward to the next one with a smile. I can't wait to see what comes next. Grandpa has me laughing whenever he enters a scene. You're doing a fantastic job!

Yay Corran! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

I love Corran's character, especially when dealing with Thorin gets difficult :D
Her grandfather is also very delightful. I love your writing style and cannot wait for the next uploaded chapter ;)

I really hope that you will write more chapters, because this storyline und your character are awesome. I love a dwarvish lass who can hold her ground against men ;)

this has the beginnings of a great story...not just an outstanding awesome one shot