Even tho you made ir pretty obvious that leaf was going to win, it's bothers me that Jolteon was able to overpower pikachus's volt takle...

A well done version of the second movie.

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this is getting interesting

Well I actually expected Lawrence to die, but then again I also thought you'd have him be arrested. It's all good in the end.

Excellent update And I liked how this chapter played out. Wonderful job.

its such an interesting story i hope you update it soon...

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Ash and friends meet Kanto Elite Four, Ice type expert Lorelei. They reunite with Leaf. In Tracey's case, he meets her for the first time.

Ash and Leaf have a double battle, this time Ash wins. The score between the two is tied.

Ash also wins Icium-Z and Firium-Z crystals in here. Misty wins a Mystic Pendant and a crush, but she decides to stick with her friends.

See you next time

I see you skipped the Snorlax and Scyther episodes. No big deal since not much of note should be different.

Really liked the way you handled the Lorelei stuff. Leaf being here was a pleasant surprise and it was nice to see what she's been up to. Plus the fact that he won their battle was a nice way to settle things somewhat between them. Additionally the fact that he got a new Z Crystal made this part more worthwhile.
Misty got some nice development too. Not only did she open up to her Gyarados but she shared her childhood trauma with her friends.

The part with Rudy wasn't too different but I liked how you switched things up in the battles and also had Ash learn more about Z moves. Plus the little things with Misty and Rudy were not bad either, especially the Mystic Water bit.

Anyway this was another well done chapter and I have to say that I am really interested in seeing how you'll handle the Power of One.

woo boy this was surprising, more so is that Ash has 5 Z-crystals. I wonder what will happen if he found one of the personal Z-crystals, imagine if he found the one for Mew and Mewtwo got curious over the idea of such a power

Excellent update and great matches

Can you allow ash to catch the Jiggulypuff, it starts to get annoying after awhile, I’ll still read anyways it’s just I don’t like that Jiggulypuff keeps putting them to sleep.

Will you have Leaf be present during Power of One to be jealous over Melody?

You know this was quite interesting to read more so you left a lot to the imagination, on top of that you actually had Ash show some humility. It's a good thing and on top of that you allowed Ash to grow so much for powerful, more so I look forward to seeing what comes next within the orange League.